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I see myself not through a mirror

I see myself from a ravens view

In black and white and ruff and skewed

My face is blurred my back is turned

In a mystical world confused

Disconnected but not alone

I see myself we’re two though one
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I See Myself

Contributed by DannyGirl on Tuesday, 26th September 2006 @ 06:45:38 PM in AEST
Topic: abstract

I see myself standing there

I see myself not through a mirror

I see myself from a ravens view

In black and white and ruff and skewed

My face is blurred my back is turned

In a mystical world confused

Disconnected but not alone

I see myself we’re two though one

Copyright Â© DannyGirl ... [ 2006-09-26 18:45:38]
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Re: I See Myself (User Rating: 1 )
by CaptainSpaldo05 on Tuesday, 26th September 2006 @ 08:30:58 PM AEST
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I see myself wanting you to expand on this..

Good write, indeed.

Re: I See Myself (User Rating: 1 )
by DannyGirl on Wednesday, 27th September 2006 @ 12:40:20 AM AEST
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Ok-Do you ever feel like your dead inside, like your living your life watching from the outskirts? Like things aren't real? I guess when I say "we're two though one", I'm talking about the person I am on the outside and the person inside my head, my thoughts and fears and dreams. Did I confuse you more!

Re: I See Myself (User Rating: 1 )
by catz77 on Thursday, 28th September 2006 @ 06:32:44 PM AEST
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i get this write
i like your poetry

catz

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