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[aid] => mick
[title] => GOOD, BAD, UGLY
[time] => 2006-09-26 11:27:44
[hometext] => This Bud's 4 u
[bodytext] => Please forgive if falter
We all play our ifs.
Forgetting when our own
Inner turmoils do persist
then we all cry forgive.
Take me as is, good, bad, ugly.
Often we forget ourselves
Take me as is, good , bad, ugly.
At times we put rules on shelf.
Now, know can be wrong.
Should spread forgiveness
Instead of Ignorent rantings.
No one ever promised bliss.
When we're wrong, oh my!
Yea, never promised perfection.
Only a heart remembering
Our sweet, dynamic connection.
Please let's let pain roll
Past our luving heavens.
Fly with me to complete unity.
You still rule my world,4 eva.
[comments] => 18
[counter] => 409
[topic] => 34
[informant] => emystar
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[alanguage] => english
[acomm] => 0
[haspoll] => 0
[pollID] => 0
[score] => 15
[ratings] => 3
[editpoem] => 1
[associated] =>
[topicname] => SongLyrics
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GOOD, BAD, UGLY
Contributed by
emystar
on
Tuesday, 26th September 2006 @ 11:27:44 AM in AEST
Topic:
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Please forgive if falter
We all play our ifs.
Forgetting when our own
Inner turmoils do persist
then we all cry forgive.
Take me as is, good, bad, ugly.
Often we forget ourselves
Take me as is, good , bad, ugly.
At times we put rules on shelf.
Now, know can be wrong.
Should spread forgiveness
Instead of Ignorent rantings.
No one ever promised bliss.
When we're wrong, oh my!
Yea, never promised perfection.
Only a heart remembering
Our sweet, dynamic connection.
Please let's let pain roll
Past our luving heavens.
Fly with me to complete unity.
You still rule my world,4 eva.
Copyright ©
emystar
... [
2006-09-26 11:27:44]
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Re: GOOD, BAD, UGLY
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by Mangos on
Tuesday, 26th September 2006 @ 04:17:26 PM AEST
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Nice job expressing yourself
Nice write
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Re: GOOD, BAD, UGLY
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by poewhit on
Tuesday, 26th September 2006 @ 06:00:04 PM AEST
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| The movie is my favorite along with once upon a time in the west. This poem is at a watering hole. Leave it at that. |
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Re: GOOD, BAD, UGLY
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by shelby on
Tuesday, 26th September 2006 @ 06:36:32 PM AEST
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The pure emotion in this is reeling. Your sound in both the message and the way you wrote it. Well done my friend!
~ Michelle~ |
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Re: GOOD, BAD, UGLY
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by secretwind on
Tuesday, 26th September 2006 @ 10:30:46 PM AEST
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Take as is....words to live by.
drink up
I got the second round. |
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Re: GOOD, BAD, UGLY
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by starry_night on
Tuesday, 26th September 2006 @ 11:55:12 PM AEST
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| You always shoot straight from the heart Emy ... :))) love these thoughts ... Jan |
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Re: GOOD, BAD, UGLY
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by brave_celt on
Wednesday, 27th September 2006 @ 05:47:46 AM AEST
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| well writen and thanks for the comment on my last poem. once again nice write |
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Re: GOOD, BAD, UGLY
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by The_Unknown on
Wednesday, 27th September 2006 @ 07:36:58 PM AEST
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emy! it's soo good to see you post something! its been a while! well as always this is a fANtastic right from you!!
awesome rgith emy =]
luvs ya!!!
~*Jess*~ |
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Re: GOOD, BAD, UGLY
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by CaptainSpaldo05 on
Wednesday, 27th September 2006 @ 10:34:57 PM AEST
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Thank you for commenting on my poem/song, because it introduced me to you..and how amazing your writing is.
:) Whenever you wanna share ideas and possibly collaborate....
I'm here :)
Jantz |
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Re: GOOD, BAD, UGLY
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by Oneir8dude on
Friday, 29th September 2006 @ 07:08:43 AM AEST
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"For all you do... This bud for you..."
For better... For worse... Eh?
Very Nice work girl... all of your work flows very nicely.. You have gained Notiriaty with this starving artist...
Thank You
Bill
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Re: GOOD, BAD, UGLY
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by Eternal_Dreamer on
Friday, 29th September 2006 @ 07:19:54 PM AEST
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Sweet Lady Emy~
You go girlfriend, this totally rocks. I have read it over and over again. The emotions and message ring loud and clear. A truly talented poetess who writes from the depths of her beautiful loving heart. I absolutely loved this my dear friend. Take care~
love, hugs n prayers,
Sue M |
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Re: GOOD, BAD, UGLY
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 29th September 2006 @ 09:02:32 PM AEST
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Emy ..
always within your writes I see a certain wisdom
and a soft way in which that wisdom is expressed.
Always impressed and left with a smile.
: )
Beautiful sentiments, my friend ~
~Breezy |
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Re: GOOD, BAD, UGLY
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 30th September 2006 @ 09:47:04 PM AEST
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wow its been a while since i have been on
and wow what a change in your writing
you have become so good at writing
i slacked for a while but now im back
I really enjoyed reading this poem
you just keep writing and i will be reading |
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Re: GOOD, BAD, UGLY
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by Man_On_High on
Sunday, 1st October 2006 @ 06:57:23 PM AEST
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a very heartfelt message dear~
..fantastic finale~
B |
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Re: GOOD, BAD, UGLY
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by spider on
Friday, 27th October 2006 @ 08:28:13 PM AEST
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| nice job :) was put off some by the titles because i tend to like my poems written with 'proper' words so that i can relate to them more but all of your stuff is great, this is my favourite of the ones i looked at though. like the way stuff rhymed but the rhyming wasnt holding it together |
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Re: GOOD, BAD, UGLY
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by Balmain_Tiger on
Tuesday, 12th December 2006 @ 07:42:05 AM AEST
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I am left in thought to ponder after reading this.
Thanks |
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Re: GOOD, BAD, UGLY
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by hoist1atca on
Tuesday, 13th February 2007 @ 11:36:09 PM AEST
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Your words still twist me up inside-
Well written and full of force-
I accept you as you are-
Joe
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Re: GOOD, BAD, UGLY
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by needledancing on
Wednesday, 6th June 2007 @ 05:06:57 AM AEST
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| I love this....reminds me of Popeye singing..I is what I is and that's all that I is.....Such a truth that at times we must take some criticizim or have to extend apologies as we grow...hey we are human...thank heavens.Good way to chaulk us up to accepting our humanly flaws. Loved it. |
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Re: GOOD, BAD, UGLY
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 28th July 2007 @ 06:40:53 PM AEST
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| Emy I just love your style of writing dont ever write in any other way. The style is yours and no one elses. I do not think any one else could write in your style. Thanks for being so kind with my fairy-tales I now have over sixhundred of them and try to write one a day. Keep smiling Emy love from bern. |
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