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Still unsure,
Your love is in demand,
My love is pure,
Here we are hand in hand,
As i'm sure our love will endure,

You I will never lie to,
You I will always trust,
For you there isn't anything I won't do,
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Breathless

Contributed by Craze on Tuesday, 26th September 2006 @ 09:20:32 AM in AEST
Topic: LovePoetry

Breathless I stand,
Still unsure,
Your love is in demand,
My love is pure,
Here we are hand in hand,
As i'm sure our love will endure,

You I will never lie to,
You I will always trust,
For you there isn't anything I won't do,
Spending time with you is a must

Copyright © Craze ... [ 2006-09-26 09:20:32]
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Re: Breathless (User Rating: 1 )
by randumbchit on Tuesday, 26th September 2006 @ 01:06:49 PM AEST
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i under stand exactly where your coming from
but i would try to expand on the topic a bit more
but overall this poem is a good start

Re: Breathless (User Rating: 1 )
by jerseysue on Tuesday, 26th September 2006 @ 02:32:30 PM AEST
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Short, sweet but beautiful. Nicely put. Thank you for sharing. Sue x

Re: Breathless (User Rating: 1 )
by poewhit on Tuesday, 26th September 2006 @ 06:08:10 PM AEST
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I think you are over infatuated. YET,E.A.POE died from love. The MOVIE BREATHLESS speaks about love and the wrongness of circumstance. THE GREAT GADSBY, love,love,love,love. Then GADSBY found DAISY was like all the rest, yet he never realized it. GADSBY DEAD-WE WERE TRAVELING. end story

Re: Breathless (User Rating: 1 )
by secretwind on Tuesday, 26th September 2006 @ 10:36:47 PM AEST
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nice short flow

Re: Breathless (User Rating: 1 )
by darkangeleyes57 on Tuesday, 31st October 2006 @ 12:31:35 PM AEST
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Can relate... This was a well written poem.. I liked the flow... I especially like the last stanza... Great poem..

Take care
Christina

Re: Breathless (User Rating: 1 )
by lipsofanangel on Wednesday, 29th November 2006 @ 02:01:56 PM AEST
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dont laugh but is this bout nina or me? or whom? Its cute though... i like it. Just dont show rachel..lol

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