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I stopped to concentrate on rimes.
Will always luv you thru eternity.
No more meanigless sex for me.
Shall never, ever have end.........
For now we stick to long time friends.

Ahh, your standing at cross roads again
It's up for you to write your end.
Will you become pure now
Or to your savage lust bow?
It's up for you to decide or loose.
Will you lower your defences with booze?

Our memories are set in stone, ya know.
My heart's cleansed from Satan's glow?
At least now, you'll stop to think.
Take your booze home to drink.
I can only hold you close to heart.
If you're lonly tears break-n-start.

Rather than fall into my self destruction nic
I'll sit alone then train my brain's tic.
Self distruction is a sneeky devil.
Lets a person think it's clever.
We only damage our own soul
When our inner feelings loose control.

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UP FOR YOU

Contributed by emystar on Tuesday, 26th September 2006 @ 05:41:49 AM in AEST
Topic: didactic

Been there done to many times
I stopped to concentrate on rimes.
Will always luv you thru eternity.
No more meanigless sex for me.
Shall never, ever have end.........
For now we stick to long time friends.

Ahh, your standing at cross roads again
It's up for you to write your end.
Will you become pure now
Or to your savage lust bow?
It's up for you to decide or loose.
Will you lower your defences with booze?

Our memories are set in stone, ya know.
My heart's cleansed from Satan's glow?
At least now, you'll stop to think.
Take your booze home to drink.
I can only hold you close to heart.
If you're lonly tears break-n-start.

Rather than fall into my self destruction nic
I'll sit alone then train my brain's tic.
Self distruction is a sneeky devil.
Lets a person think it's clever.
We only damage our own soul
When our inner feelings loose control.

Copyright © emystar ... [ 2006-09-26 05:41:49]
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Re: UP FOR YOU (User Rating: 1 )
by sadaddy on Tuesday, 26th September 2006 @ 06:05:29 AM AEST
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When I read this one, Charlie Daniels came to mind. And I do not know why. LOL May you continue to have peace and joy in your heart young lady.

sadaddy

Re: UP FOR YOU (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Tuesday, 26th September 2006 @ 11:20:50 AM AEST
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Last call fer alcohol ... and a meaningful relationship. Nice write, emy.

wabl
KenMoore
cowboy

Re: UP FOR YOU (User Rating: 1 )
by jerseysue on Tuesday, 26th September 2006 @ 01:48:20 PM AEST
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This is really good, and very well written.It flows well, and keeps your interest going with each line. Thank you for sharing. Sue x

Re: UP FOR YOU (User Rating: 1 )
by thumper on Tuesday, 26th September 2006 @ 02:03:09 PM AEST
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This really made me stop and think. "Self destruction is a sneeky devil" yeah it is. Thank you for an enlightening write. 5/5 Peace.
Thumper ;o)

Re: UP FOR YOU (User Rating: 1 )
by secretwind on Tuesday, 26th September 2006 @ 10:45:29 PM AEST
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good flow and a great topic

Re: UP FOR YOU (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Wednesday, 1st November 2006 @ 07:38:04 PM AEST
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Nice meter and flow.
I like the determination that is felt from this!!

Re: UP FOR YOU (User Rating: 1 )
by Sturgezulu on Saturday, 2nd December 2006 @ 02:51:06 PM AEST
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sweet write emy ,very much enjoyed reading

Re: UP FOR YOU (User Rating: 1 )
by myheartsvoice on Thursday, 1st March 2007 @ 07:37:00 PM AEST
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This line> " We only damage our own soul
When our inner feelings loose control." whew! Awesome line, damaging our soul cause of loss control, so we keep it in and do even more ireprable damage to our self till we explode and take everyone else with us. how nice it would be to simply destroy those who push our buttons so as to keep there's intact. great write emystar, very effective.

Ben

Re: UP FOR YOU (User Rating: 1 )
by priss on Tuesday, 6th March 2007 @ 09:27:15 PM AEST
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wow, emy, that was an awesome poem. so strong and powerful; makes one want to take a step back and rethink their choices (poor ones), does that to me anyway. loved every line. thanks so much!
~p

Re: UP FOR YOU (User Rating: 1 )
by positivelypurple on Wednesday, 11th April 2007 @ 10:06:08 AM AEST
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Great writing with a little bit of mischief...very endearing emy! good one.

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