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I was enough for you.
When my touch was
enough to get you through.
I remember nights of
sweet pillow talk.
And all those precious
days on a cloud I would walk.

How stupid of me
to think I mattered to you?
When I am now a nothing
all ripped up and blue.

To be so close, at times you were
my only friend.
Who would have thought we'd be
here at our bitter end?
What happened to the man
who wiped my tears away?
What happened to the young girl
who is this woman today?

How stupid of me
to think I mattered to you?
When I am now a nothing
all ripped up and blue.

You walked away from the
only one to really care about you.
Who cares that you feel
the way that you do?
Screw this hurt and screw
this sorrow.
Screw all the people
with their bright tomorrows.

How stupid of me
to think I mattered to you?
When I am now a nothing
all ripped up and blue. [comments] => 4 [counter] => 219 [topic] => 32 [informant] => nativesunflower4 [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => SadPoetry )

How Stupid of Me

Contributed by nativesunflower4 on Tuesday, 26th September 2006 @ 01:25:06 AM in AEST
Topic: SadPoetry

There was a time when
I was enough for you.
When my touch was
enough to get you through.
I remember nights of
sweet pillow talk.
And all those precious
days on a cloud I would walk.

How stupid of me
to think I mattered to you?
When I am now a nothing
all ripped up and blue.

To be so close, at times you were
my only friend.
Who would have thought we'd be
here at our bitter end?
What happened to the man
who wiped my tears away?
What happened to the young girl
who is this woman today?

How stupid of me
to think I mattered to you?
When I am now a nothing
all ripped up and blue.

You walked away from the
only one to really care about you.
Who cares that you feel
the way that you do?
Screw this hurt and screw
this sorrow.
Screw all the people
with their bright tomorrows.

How stupid of me
to think I mattered to you?
When I am now a nothing
all ripped up and blue.

Copyright © nativesunflower4 ... [ 2006-09-26 01:25:06]
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Re: How Stupid of Me (User Rating: 1 )
by sadaddy on Tuesday, 26th September 2006 @ 02:05:21 AM AEST
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I was able to feel the sadness in your write. I am sorry that you are having to experience this ordeal. I hope and pray that your heart will mend with time. May you have peace and joy in your heart young lady. Oh by the way, your not stupid. "Smile"

sadaddy

Re: How Stupid of Me (User Rating: 1 )
by Elisabeth on Tuesday, 26th September 2006 @ 02:18:58 AM AEST
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I feel for you, as I have had to feel this once before myself. I honestly don't know how I got through it. That part was like a dream. For some that pain doesn't ever go away, you just learn to live with it. For others their new tomorrow comes, and they forget what happened yesterday. Best wishes to you.

Re: How Stupid of Me (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Tuesday, 26th September 2006 @ 03:03:57 AM AEST
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Sad but awesomly written.
all I can say is that I know how it hurts.
luv, huggs, strength,
emy

Re: How Stupid of Me (User Rating: 1 )
by AnastasiaN on Tuesday, 26th September 2006 @ 06:02:59 AM AEST
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dammit have you been eavesdropping??? my sentiments exactly!! how is it that love can be so temporary??? or an even bigger question....was it even love to begin with??? and there really should be some sort of insurance for this type of tragedy...stupid world...

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