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Array ( [sid] => 126200 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => You Shall Not Pass [time] => 2006-09-26 01:06:45 [hometext] => I didn't have a title for this one. I love this quote of Gandolf's from LOTR, so I just put that as the title. LOL [bodytext] => Classic obscenities
Burning your remedies
Purity
Pass a beer
It's okay for now
That you can fornicate with time
Every sin that you box away
Strike a match
Burn some more
Don't think
Sing
Love anthem
"We the people, live for what is not"
Eye for a heart
Tooth for a soul...
Pay [comments] => 6 [counter] => 436 [topic] => 6 [informant] => Elisabeth [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 14 [ratings] => 3 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => AngryPoetry )

You Shall Not Pass

Contributed by Elisabeth on Tuesday, 26th September 2006 @ 01:06:45 AM in AEST
Topic: AngryPoetry

Classic obscenities
Burning your remedies
Purity
Pass a beer
It's okay for now
That you can fornicate with time
Every sin that you box away
Strike a match
Burn some more
Don't think
Sing
Love anthem
"We the people, live for what is not"
Eye for a heart
Tooth for a soul...
Pay

Copyright Â© Elisabeth ... [ 2006-09-26 01:06:45]
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Re: You Shall Not Pass (User Rating: 1 )
by sadaddy on Tuesday, 26th September 2006 @ 02:54:30 AM AEST
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Oh there is nothing like a women scorned. I’ll be standing clear of you. “Strike a match, burn some more” Hell’s fire has no mercy I see. “Smile” I may have interpreted this poem the wrong way. If so forgive me.

sadaddy

Re: You Shall Not Pass (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Tuesday, 26th September 2006 @ 11:13:04 AM AEST
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Time tested wisdom in a thought-provoking shortie! Too high a price t' pay! Excellent, Elisabeth!

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KenMoore
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Re: You Shall Not Pass (User Rating: 1 )
by Man_On_High on Tuesday, 26th September 2006 @ 08:03:37 PM AEST
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..leaves much to the imagination~
good work.

B

Re: You Shall Not Pass (User Rating: 1 )
by faith_my_eyes on Sunday, 1st October 2006 @ 09:02:30 AM AEST
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excellent, astract, but speaks loud and clear! all of those things, indeed shall not pass..

Re: You Shall Not Pass (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Wednesday, 16th June 2010 @ 08:26:17 PM AEST
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This is one of those poems that seems a few interpretations could be read into it or gotten out of it. I especially like those first two lines. Seems a lot of good can be angered, perhaps even injured from the age old bad.

Very interesting write.

Tim Smile!

Smile!

Re: You Shall Not Pass (User Rating: 1 )
by TsunamiWaverider on Wednesday, 25th August 2010 @ 08:39:57 PM AEST
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Every time i put 'fornicate' in a poem they remove it....LOL

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