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Array ( [sid] => 126190 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Gone [time] => 2006-09-25 16:58:32 [hometext] => [bodytext] => I screamed out your name
Over and over, I cried desperately
The volume of my voice seemed to drop
The image of you has faded
As you seemed to walk away

I don't want to say another cliche
For love, as now you are gone.
For which, I cannot control
It hurts too much to try and try
For something everyone knew wouldn't work
I was in such denial then
I've finally learned my lesson
And let you be, allowing to let go
To let go of the pain I tried to hold onto
You were my pain

[comments] => 5 [counter] => 235 [topic] => 22 [informant] => The_Young_Poet [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LostLove )

Gone

Contributed by The_Young_Poet on Monday, 25th September 2006 @ 04:58:32 PM in AEST
Topic: LostLove

I screamed out your name
Over and over, I cried desperately
The volume of my voice seemed to drop
The image of you has faded
As you seemed to walk away

I don't want to say another cliche
For love, as now you are gone.
For which, I cannot control
It hurts too much to try and try
For something everyone knew wouldn't work
I was in such denial then
I've finally learned my lesson
And let you be, allowing to let go
To let go of the pain I tried to hold onto
You were my pain

Copyright Â© The_Young_Poet ... [ 2006-09-25 16:58:32]
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Re: Gone (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Monday, 25th September 2006 @ 05:28:33 PM AEST
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the emotion in this poem is amazing.

Re: Gone (User Rating: 1 )
by Oneir8dude on Monday, 25th September 2006 @ 11:54:11 PM AEST
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Thank You very meaningful and heartfelt...
I hope you are okay...

Bill

Re: Gone (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Tuesday, 26th September 2006 @ 12:22:38 AM AEST
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U might be a young poet but ur a great writer.
huggs,
emy
also very wise.

Re: Gone (User Rating: 1 )
by Eternal_Dreamer on Tuesday, 26th September 2006 @ 12:50:18 AM AEST
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Deep heartfelt emotions poured out from your write. One can feel the pain and sadness through your words. You have done a great job penning down your emotions. By doing that it helps your broken heart to heal. Wishing you much brighter days ahead.
take care.
hugs n prayers,
Sue M

Re: Gone (User Rating: 1 )
by Mangos on Tuesday, 26th September 2006 @ 04:18:54 PM AEST
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Very powerful-
Something everyone’s probably felt

Awesome job

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