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Array ( [sid] => 126125 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Dreams [time] => 2006-09-23 21:58:49 [hometext] => I was trying to go to sleep, but some of these lines kept keeping me up... Sorry, my bad [bodytext] => Dreams

I知 floating in my world of dreams
My keeper never seems to keep
My place beyond this sleep
Or anything close to it
So now I drift
Into a pastel abyss
I知 floating through the mystery
And the calmness of all this
My mind a soft calamity
Of things that come to be
My thoughts adrift
In all that comes to be
And all life痴 mystery
Seems abhorrent to me
It sits so dreadfully obvious
And painfully deadly
But what do I know?
I知 just an observer here
And nothing besides
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Dreams

Contributed by twbanter on Saturday, 23rd September 2006 @ 09:58:49 PM in AEST
Topic: oops



Dreams

I知 floating in my world of dreams
My keeper never seems to keep
My place beyond this sleep
Or anything close to it
So now I drift
Into a pastel abyss
I知 floating through the mystery
And the calmness of all this
My mind a soft calamity
Of things that come to be
My thoughts adrift
In all that comes to be
And all life痴 mystery
Seems abhorrent to me
It sits so dreadfully obvious
And painfully deadly
But what do I know?
I知 just an observer here
And nothing besides




Copyright ツゥ twbanter ... [ 2006-09-23 21:58:49]
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Re: Dreams (User Rating: 1 )
by Man_On_High on Saturday, 23rd September 2006 @ 10:29:57 PM AEST
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..can I say how much I loved these lines:

"My mind a soft calamity
Of things that come to be"

very nice~

B


Re: Dreams (User Rating: 1 )
by StormyNites on Saturday, 23rd September 2006 @ 10:45:42 PM AEST
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I too loved this

My mind a soft calamity
Of things that come to be


Great poem!!


Re: Dreams (User Rating: 1 )
by catz77 on Saturday, 23rd September 2006 @ 10:49:43 PM AEST
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i agree
great write

catz


Re: Dreams (User Rating: 1 )
by Vampirequeen on Saturday, 23rd September 2006 @ 10:52:13 PM AEST
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Impressive write


Re: Dreams (User Rating: 1 )
by Skillz on Saturday, 23rd September 2006 @ 11:21:05 PM AEST
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Really love the whole poem!! Great poem!!




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