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Array ( [sid] => 126114 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => My darkest hour [time] => 2006-09-23 16:42:55 [hometext] => please read comment and critique [bodytext] => in this dismal hour
I sit at the edge of our bed
trying to find the bravery to lay down my weary head
I am grateful for our memories
for they will never die
but it keeps me on my knees
that you had to say good bye
I reminisce on days of gladness
when you were close to me
as I fade into the darkness
of loves forsaken sea
I can't go on knowing that you'll
never be my bride
no I just can't go on living without you
by my side
no life isn't worh living
since our love had to die [comments] => 6 [counter] => 250 [topic] => 13 [informant] => brave_celt [notes] => Edited for spelling as requested - Moderator_16 [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 0 [associated] => [topicname] => DarkPoetry )

My darkest hour

Contributed by brave_celt on Saturday, 23rd September 2006 @ 04:42:55 PM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry

in this dismal hour
I sit at the edge of our bed
trying to find the bravery to lay down my weary head
I am grateful for our memories
for they will never die
but it keeps me on my knees
that you had to say good bye
I reminisce on days of gladness
when you were close to me
as I fade into the darkness
of loves forsaken sea
I can't go on knowing that you'll
never be my bride
no I just can't go on living without you
by my side
no life isn't worh living
since our love had to die

Copyright © brave_celt ... [ 2006-09-23 16:42:55]
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Re: My darkest hour (User Rating: 1 )
by brittaney on Saturday, 23rd September 2006 @ 07:27:38 PM AEST
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The word choice in this piece is great. It all seems to frit together nicely. Well done!
Britt~

Re: My darkest hour (User Rating: 1 )
by detourchick on Saturday, 23rd September 2006 @ 08:33:17 PM AEST
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really good
just really good

Re: My darkest hour (User Rating: 1 )
by CassandraCain on Saturday, 23rd September 2006 @ 10:07:59 PM AEST
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Nicely written. I'd suggest use punctuation. It gives the effect of knowledgeable resources. It also looks professional. I think It's a good poem. You're off to a great start!

Re: My darkest hour (User Rating: 1 )
by chaos78 on Saturday, 23rd September 2006 @ 11:39:31 PM AEST
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truly sad but well written i did enjoy reading ,good poem

Re: My darkest hour (User Rating: 1 )
by RLWildPassions on Sunday, 24th September 2006 @ 02:33:19 PM AEST
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but it keeps me on my knees
that you had to say good bye

but you see what you did write.. all the world here.. and you keep that feel, that love that once give to you, and you no forget it. and I say to you.. it is lovely. your poem is so wonderful a remininisce.. and it is helpful for your heart to keep. so do that. rl

Re: My darkest hour (User Rating: 1 )
by Gothchyk on Monday, 9th October 2006 @ 05:49:28 PM AEST
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great write, you expressed the pain of losing love beautifully.

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