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Array ( [sid] => 126113 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Alone. [time] => 2006-09-23 16:38:56 [hometext] => Just something I am going threw . [bodytext] => AS I can see the stars at night.
So can I see you.
I had a life of smoking cigs but now i cant.
I was told to quit because of cancer.

SO now I did but now I live a life with anxiety and fear.
Because I thought that tobacco was my friend.

oh how I found out later in my life it wasnt a friend after all.
I had emphysema and I quit thank god they caught it in time.

Just remember this probably doesnt make any sense what I wrote.
but I dont care.
Just something I wanted to write about and tell you. [comments] => 3 [counter] => 250 [topic] => 21 [informant] => butterflygirl40 [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 6 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => Lifepoems )

Alone.

Contributed by butterflygirl40 on Saturday, 23rd September 2006 @ 04:38:56 PM in AEST
Topic: Lifepoems

AS I can see the stars at night.
So can I see you.
I had a life of smoking cigs but now i cant.
I was told to quit because of cancer.

SO now I did but now I live a life with anxiety and fear.
Because I thought that tobacco was my friend.

oh how I found out later in my life it wasnt a friend after all.
I had emphysema and I quit thank god they caught it in time.

Just remember this probably doesnt make any sense what I wrote.
but I dont care.
Just something I wanted to write about and tell you.

Copyright © butterflygirl40 ... [ 2006-09-23 16:38:56]
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Re: Alone. (User Rating: 1 )
by brave_celt on Saturday, 23rd September 2006 @ 06:09:08 PM AEST
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good write you tell the story well and get right to the poing i like it

Re: Alone. (User Rating: 1 )
by Vampirequeen on Saturday, 23rd September 2006 @ 11:50:10 PM AEST
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interesting write
well done

Re: Alone. (User Rating: 1 )
by RLWildPassions on Sunday, 24th September 2006 @ 02:26:02 PM AEST
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well it makes sense to me, not for how you seem to think you (caught) it, not to make light of illness my friend, but there are so many way for a human to take sick. Now, see here, my friend, you keep your chin and prayer to go.. because my lovely butterfly40, my big fan, you are go to make it, to me, like I do it. and I get so discourage with all that I read and hear, and try to keep alive, but it take gut and courage to do it, and I say , I want to give up today, and tomorrow a new one.. but you just keep on.. and if my breath hold out I keep go to you.. I am not feel so well in spirit, but I do hold on, I lost my brother, my sister mother to law, I lose my neighbor man his young son all this past 2 week, and yet, I make cake and bake goodie, now I say, you hold up, I do it.. and twitter worry in prayer, wrap that colorful rosary around and kiss it, and if you do not have that, you get a rope and you knot it and you pray each minute you write it, and you say amen, you go to make it, amen. I am wait for Mick to close me down, but my heart say why I wait to take care to my friend I so love here at YPDC, and I am rejoice now. rl

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