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I wish I could convey how goddamn surreal it is and how surreal it feels. No matter if we were created, no divine being controls us, no divine being helps us…we are all just alone.
I hope you’ll understand, that what I’m saying now is the beginning of a long road, I lost a friend for the blindness I have, because being alone is so much harder than just giving in.
So I’m not stronger or better or brighter. Just more dead and more lost than before. Suicide is too easy to attempt. And I can’t go back now that I’ve betrayed my life back into misery.
This doesn’t rhyme or make sense in any way, like many surreal things. Life is so much more than all your shallow hearts can find. I see exactly what I left behind.
So pray to your god, he isn’t coming. He never helped me, so why should he start with you now?
No miracles exist, just fate. We are destined to all fall in the same pit. One by one, in glory and fire, we all die in the same graveyard.
***** it all; because I’m not going down with this ship. I’ll make my own way. Follow me to your demise, because life holds nothing for me anymore.
So say your god will save me, or send me to hell. I don’t care, because I’ve lost it all….

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So Say Your God Can Save Me

Contributed by MG_Akela22090 on Saturday, 23rd September 2006 @ 02:06:32 PM in AEST
Topic: surreal

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I wish I could convey how goddamn surreal it is and how surreal it feels. No matter if we were created, no divine being controls us, no divine being helps us…we are all just alone.
I hope you’ll understand, that what I’m saying now is the beginning of a long road, I lost a friend for the blindness I have, because being alone is so much harder than just giving in.
So I’m not stronger or better or brighter. Just more dead and more lost than before. Suicide is too easy to attempt. And I can’t go back now that I’ve betrayed my life back into misery.
This doesn’t rhyme or make sense in any way, like many surreal things. Life is so much more than all your shallow hearts can find. I see exactly what I left behind.
So pray to your god, he isn’t coming. He never helped me, so why should he start with you now?
No miracles exist, just fate. We are destined to all fall in the same pit. One by one, in glory and fire, we all die in the same graveyard.
***** it all; because I’m not going down with this ship. I’ll make my own way. Follow me to your demise, because life holds nothing for me anymore.
So say your god will save me, or send me to hell. I don’t care, because I’ve lost it all….

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Re: So Say Your God Can Save Me (User Rating: 1 )
by Elisabeth on Saturday, 23rd September 2006 @ 10:46:11 PM AEST
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It's unfortunate you feel this way. Life can be very hurtful and seem to be without purpose a lot of the time. There is a light at the end of the tunnel; just depends on how far down the tunnel you're willing to go.

Re: So Say Your God Can Save Me (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Sunday, 24th September 2006 @ 04:38:01 AM AEST
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This is so sad.
huggs, prayer,
emy
It does make sense as you're obviously very angry for some reason. I hope you feel better soon.

Re: So Say Your God Can Save Me (User Rating: 1 )
by RLWildPassions on Sunday, 24th September 2006 @ 02:06:55 PM AEST
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in for the long haul myself, but hey, dang it, some days are just so bad you just want to say, screeeeeeeeam.. and pray, devil get down that road, Jesus Christ, step on those muddy rocks, amen.. and keep on a keepin on brother, sister, it aint all bad 24/7, sometimes feels that way, but you just keep on a prayn sweetie, and He will hear ya, and ifn you don't hearem, just keep a prayin, cuz you know what?, it aint Him that ainta helpin you or I, its us, that is not believin He is there to hear or help us, now.. we are human, and if you are, like me, and got the blood and flesh to prove it to me, just keep on a prayin, now I know you will read and hear the devil typing and talkin now and then, but you keep a prayin, hear me, do ya hear me, do it now, like I am, and do not give up child, we all in it, child, my dearest, love you... do not succomb to that evil that you hear, or read.. it aint no good child.. He got us safe, keep a prayn, never give up.. never baby.. never... rl

Re: So Say Your God Can Save Me (User Rating: 1 )
by Keilantra on Sunday, 24th September 2006 @ 05:30:28 PM AEST
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i can't go inot the further depths of this. i'm not you. i cant see your situation.
but i can however, tell you that this is a beautiful write.
get better, please,

xXx

~kei

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