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Letting the weight of consequence squeeze you to be vunerable
I wanted to see you cry
To know you felt compassion
To know that you felt more than pride
I wish you to swallow that which makes you strong
So you know what it is to be weak'
To know helplessness by it's first name
To feel alone and confused
And abandoned
To be me for one second to be me
I can't wait forever for the apology that does not exsist
I can not wait forever for you to enable a cause
I can not wait forever
No I can not wait forever.
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helplessness's first name

Contributed by Julie on Friday, 14th February 2003 @ 02:00:00 PM in AEST
Topic: oops

I wanted to leave you with cold regret
Letting the weight of consequence squeeze you to be vunerable
I wanted to see you cry
To know you felt compassion
To know that you felt more than pride
I wish you to swallow that which makes you strong
So you know what it is to be weak'
To know helplessness by it's first name
To feel alone and confused
And abandoned
To be me for one second to be me
I can't wait forever for the apology that does not exsist
I can not wait forever for you to enable a cause
I can not wait forever
No I can not wait forever.

Copyright © Julie ... [ 2003-02-14 14:00:00]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: helplessness's first name (User Rating: 1 )
by Jenni_Kalicharan on Friday, 14th February 2003 @ 04:48:30 PM AEST
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Interesting write.....
Jenni

Re: helplessness's first name (User Rating: 1 )
by Maha on Friday, 14th February 2003 @ 04:50:03 PM AEST
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This is so wonderful! It's good that you made up your mind and chose to be strong enough to leave, and believe me, you'll never regret it!
Well expressed! God bless you!

Re: helplessness's first name (User Rating: 1 )
by Paul on Thursday, 27th February 2003 @ 07:05:56 PM AEST
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You know, speaking for us guys; we can be jerks sometimes. Sucks that stuff like that has to happen to cool chics, but it only makes you stronger(that's corny, but true). But you'll find a good one as long as you don't settle for the jerks.

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