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Array ( [sid] => 125977 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => faking it [time] => 2006-09-20 02:12:36 [hometext] => sick of it all! [bodytext] => Lies in your eyes
good intentions in your heart
lie to my face
to not rip me apart
burning in my ears
waiting for the truth
hating every moment
knowing it's no use
Yes, waiting for the truth
hoping that you'll change
too far to go back
it will never be the same
myself I despise
for sticking around
though deep down I know
my answers won't be found
Easy to walk away
from the person you are now
it's just the memories of who I once knew
still sticking around
I know that you want me
and I know that you care
but it's just not enough
when the love's barley there
we had some great times
of which I can't replace
but it's all come down to this
one moment we must face
Is what we have really worth it?
you pretend to keep me safe
but it just isn't working
It's all written on your face
so let's just quit acting now
I'll stop with this fake smile
and maybe we can both move on
and have really happiness a while [comments] => 3 [counter] => 292 [topic] => 48 [informant] => gurlg0newr0ng [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => EmotionalPoetry )

faking it

Contributed by gurlg0newr0ng on Wednesday, 20th September 2006 @ 02:12:36 AM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry

Lies in your eyes
good intentions in your heart
lie to my face
to not rip me apart
burning in my ears
waiting for the truth
hating every moment
knowing it's no use
Yes, waiting for the truth
hoping that you'll change
too far to go back
it will never be the same
myself I despise
for sticking around
though deep down I know
my answers won't be found
Easy to walk away
from the person you are now
it's just the memories of who I once knew
still sticking around
I know that you want me
and I know that you care
but it's just not enough
when the love's barley there
we had some great times
of which I can't replace
but it's all come down to this
one moment we must face
Is what we have really worth it?
you pretend to keep me safe
but it just isn't working
It's all written on your face
so let's just quit acting now
I'll stop with this fake smile
and maybe we can both move on
and have really happiness a while

Copyright © gurlg0newr0ng ... [ 2006-09-20 02:12:36]
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Re: faking it (User Rating: 1 )
by Nothingness on Wednesday, 20th September 2006 @ 08:53:55 AM AEST
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Wow very nice write makes alot of sence and i know a lot have been there i really enjoyed this write anwesome job i look forward to seeing more from you

Re: faking it (User Rating: 1 )
by darkangeleyes57 on Friday, 22nd September 2006 @ 08:54:03 AM AEST
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This was very well expressed... I can relate... My last relationship was like this.. He started changing and I couldn't figure out why and I am a person who hates change... And I loved him but wanted the old him back and apparently I wasn't gonna get that... He kept changing and finally we ended up apart and it killed me... I was better off.. I couldn't keep faking.. My biggest thing that I always said was Pretend and deny... Because that is all that I did and could do... And that eventually started to kill me inside...

Great poem..
Take care
christina

Re: faking it (User Rating: 1 )
by AnastasiaN on Wednesday, 27th September 2006 @ 11:42:55 AM AEST
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awesome write. i can completely relate also. some men think that lying will keep you safe but it's the lies themselves that most of us cannot bear. and it's nearly impossible to make them understand. lies are toxic...regardless of their intentions. honesty is much less complicated...why can't ppl just embrace honesty??

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