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Array ( [sid] => 12594 [catid] => 1 [aid] => Mick [title] => Un-Known [time] => 2003-02-14 09:20:00 [hometext] => In Loving Memory Of
Marrissa Kaite Branca
December 28th 1986---January 27th 2003

That day was tragic, when you chose to take your life and leave us all that loved and cared behind.
We know your much happier where you are at now.
May that place stay as beautiful as you always were. [bodytext] => Sweet dreams my friend
And soon you’ll awake.
The clouds are raining
They’re crying for you.
Sweet dreams my friend
And soon you’ll awake.
Your gone and now
We all will miss you.

Sweet dreams my friend
And soon you’ll awake.
The clouds have cried
All of their tears.
Sweet dreams my friend
And soon you’ll awake.
It’s our time to cry
Now that you’re gone.

Leaving wasn’t the best way out
But you chose to do it that way
It’s like a distant prayer deep inside
That we can never hold...forever

Sweet dreams my friend
And soon you’ll awake.
The night was young
And the day moved in fast.
Sweet dreams my friend
And soon you’ll awake.
You left the world
And never looked back.

Leaving wasn’t the best way out
But you chose to do it that way
It’s like a distant prayer deep inside
That we can never hold...again. [comments] => 3 [counter] => 202 [topic] => 39 [informant] => metalmouth666 [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => Grief )
Un-Known

Contributed by metalmouth666 on Friday, 14th February 2003 @ 09:20:00 AM in AEST
Topic: Grief



Sweet dreams my friend
And soon you’ll awake.
The clouds are raining
They’re crying for you.
Sweet dreams my friend
And soon you’ll awake.
Your gone and now
We all will miss you.

Sweet dreams my friend
And soon you’ll awake.
The clouds have cried
All of their tears.
Sweet dreams my friend
And soon you’ll awake.
It’s our time to cry
Now that you’re gone.

Leaving wasn’t the best way out
But you chose to do it that way
It’s like a distant prayer deep inside
That we can never hold...forever

Sweet dreams my friend
And soon you’ll awake.
The night was young
And the day moved in fast.
Sweet dreams my friend
And soon you’ll awake.
You left the world
And never looked back.

Leaving wasn’t the best way out
But you chose to do it that way
It’s like a distant prayer deep inside
That we can never hold...again.




Copyright © metalmouth666 ... [ 2003-02-14 09:20:00]
(Date/Time posted on site)





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Re: Un-Known (User Rating: 1 )
by LOWMAN613 on Friday, 14th February 2003 @ 09:27:50 AM AEST
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AAWWWW so very touching & sad,I'm sorry for your loss this was so beautiful in their honor! Christina


Re: Un-Known (User Rating: 1 )
by M on Friday, 14th February 2003 @ 11:23:00 AM AEST
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ahhhh, this is so amazingly sweet, so beautiful, your comment is so touching too. I'm sure your friend is very grateful for this poem.This is such a beautiful poem. I'm so sorry for your lose. Emily


Re: Un-Known (User Rating: 0 )
by Former_Member on Monday, 10th November 2003 @ 11:11:09 PM AEST
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Thank You Ryan, for your beautiful words.
from:
Marrissa's mom




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