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Array ( [sid] => 125926 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Spencer [time] => 2006-09-18 21:03:31 [hometext] => poem explains it all. [bodytext] => In the early morning
wake up to a bright blue sky
and lightning comes at any time
just to break it down
and make it ugly
I know it happened just for me
because no one else can feel like me
or understand
that's alright because
I can handle all that you throw down
and I hope that you can find
a perfect place where skies are blue
all of the time
that's all that matters

its all about the iceing
you don't care about the inside
it looks good
must be great
and I know that is all you see
what would it matter anyways?
because I can see right through you

theres no reason I should try and do this anymore
all my reasons are gone
no reason why you should
try to make excuses
to make me feel alright
excuses call for stupid reasons
and I know theres not much that I can offer right now
just give me one little second
and I will try my hardest to make you feel like I am some one else

don't just use me
to get closer
to the one I know you adore
spare me the pain

I know someone that cares
that dosnt like to see me cry
dosnt wish me any pain
He's caring
loyal
and sensitive
he's someone I can actually talk to
tell things to
unlike you
you're just using me
I see right through you
past all the lies

I wish the world was flat
like the old days
and I could travel just by folding a map
no more airplanes or speed trains
there would be no distance that could hold us back
standing here with all my
so-called friends and you're not the one
that I'm thinking of
as 30 dialogs turn into 1 [comments] => 2 [counter] => 164 [topic] => 25 [informant] => The_Unknown [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => MiscPoems )
Spencer

Contributed by The_Unknown on Monday, 18th September 2006 @ 09:03:31 PM in AEST
Topic: MiscPoems



In the early morning
wake up to a bright blue sky
and lightning comes at any time
just to break it down
and make it ugly
I know it happened just for me
because no one else can feel like me
or understand
that's alright because
I can handle all that you throw down
and I hope that you can find
a perfect place where skies are blue
all of the time
that's all that matters

its all about the iceing
you don't care about the inside
it looks good
must be great
and I know that is all you see
what would it matter anyways?
because I can see right through you

theres no reason I should try and do this anymore
all my reasons are gone
no reason why you should
try to make excuses
to make me feel alright
excuses call for stupid reasons
and I know theres not much that I can offer right now
just give me one little second
and I will try my hardest to make you feel like I am some one else

don't just use me
to get closer
to the one I know you adore
spare me the pain

I know someone that cares
that dosnt like to see me cry
dosnt wish me any pain
He's caring
loyal
and sensitive
he's someone I can actually talk to
tell things to
unlike you
you're just using me
I see right through you
past all the lies

I wish the world was flat
like the old days
and I could travel just by folding a map
no more airplanes or speed trains
there would be no distance that could hold us back
standing here with all my
so-called friends and you're not the one
that I'm thinking of
as 30 dialogs turn into 1




Copyright © The_Unknown ... [ 2006-09-18 21:03:31]
(Date/Time posted on site)





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Re: Spencer (User Rating: 1 )
by kasean on Tuesday, 19th September 2006 @ 02:04:56 AM AEST
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I loved it, your very good with your words.


Re: Spencer (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Sunday, 1st October 2006 @ 10:25:12 PM AEST
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his is awesome writing and u r wise beyond your age.
Great work, my friend.
huggs, smiles, luvs ya,
emy




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