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If i was the ruler of the air, I would give you the sky,

If i was ruler of the earth, I would give you all the gardens,

If i was ruler of your heart, I would give you mine

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The Ruler

Contributed by Amicus on Monday, 18th September 2006 @ 08:53:43 PM in AEST
Topic: LovePoetry

If i was the ruler of the water, I would give you the ocean,

If i was the ruler of the air, I would give you the sky,

If i was ruler of the earth, I would give you all the gardens,

If i was ruler of your heart, I would give you mine

Copyright © Amicus ... [ 2006-09-18 20:53:43]
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Re: The Ruler (User Rating: 1 )
by kasean on Tuesday, 19th September 2006 @ 02:08:31 AM AEST
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This was so sweet... If i was the ruler of rating i'd give you a ten. im a dork... ha but i really liked it

Re: The Ruler (User Rating: 1 )
by poet_of_anger on Monday, 25th September 2006 @ 06:36:19 PM AEST
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A poem is good if you can feel something that the author put into it. So, while i cannot pinpoint your thoughts, there is emotion, good job.

Re: The Ruler (User Rating: 1 )
by deadheadpoet on Tuesday, 26th September 2006 @ 12:23:29 AM AEST
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This was so basic and tender. Awww call me crazy, but I liked it, man. It made me smile. I also found it interesting that you used a lower case i in the first section of the line and then an upper case I for the ending piece of the line. Interesting...I was percieving it as, at first you're feeling not worthy, perhaps unimportant.....but then after the love...after the realization of what you can give, the ultra powerful you shows through. Nice.
Peace, Laura

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