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Array ( [sid] => 125889 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => My Fantasy [time] => 2006-09-18 06:45:55 [hometext] => [bodytext] => You’ve broken my heart
And stolen my tears
It’s all my fault
And all I feared

I ruin your days
And stuff up your nights
Embarrass you always
And cause all the fights

Our minds are lost
And your hands are fisted
But I’m just me
Warped and twisted

Breaking your courage
Your happiness is gone
You’re a beautiful guy
But I don’t belong

You see, you’re my world
Where the sun always shines
The grass is always green
And the clouds are always bright

But my world’s a dull place
Full of broken hearts
Dark eyes & blood tears
With the earth falling apart

That’s why I’m scared to lose you
‘Coz you’re my world’s paradise
Where we are always smiling
And our futures clear and bright

But when you decide to leave
That will be the day
I kill myself inside
And my world blows away

As I sit here and wipe my tears
I hang my head down low
Knowing I’m not worth a thing
And my heart so dull and shallow

I wish I did deserve you
But you’re my minds fantasy
Where the clouds are made of diamonds
And the grass is sparkly

I love you more than anything
And I’m sorry for treating you bad
You deserve so much more
Than a girl that makes you sad

I suppose you’ll just be my fantasy
Where it pours diamante rain
The sun turns platinum gold
And you love me the same
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My Fantasy

Contributed by mali on Monday, 18th September 2006 @ 06:45:55 AM in AEST
Topic: fantasy

You’ve broken my heart
And stolen my tears
It’s all my fault
And all I feared

I ruin your days
And stuff up your nights
Embarrass you always
And cause all the fights

Our minds are lost
And your hands are fisted
But I’m just me
Warped and twisted

Breaking your courage
Your happiness is gone
You’re a beautiful guy
But I don’t belong

You see, you’re my world
Where the sun always shines
The grass is always green
And the clouds are always bright

But my world’s a dull place
Full of broken hearts
Dark eyes & blood tears
With the earth falling apart

That’s why I’m scared to lose you
‘Coz you’re my world’s paradise
Where we are always smiling
And our futures clear and bright

But when you decide to leave
That will be the day
I kill myself inside
And my world blows away

As I sit here and wipe my tears
I hang my head down low
Knowing I’m not worth a thing
And my heart so dull and shallow

I wish I did deserve you
But you’re my minds fantasy
Where the clouds are made of diamonds
And the grass is sparkly

I love you more than anything
And I’m sorry for treating you bad
You deserve so much more
Than a girl that makes you sad

I suppose you’ll just be my fantasy
Where it pours diamante rain
The sun turns platinum gold
And you love me the same

Copyright Â© mali ... [ 2006-09-18 06:45:55]
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Re: My Fantasy (User Rating: 1 )
by ever1der on Monday, 18th September 2006 @ 01:28:31 PM AEST
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diamante rain ..I like that.

Re: My Fantasy (User Rating: 1 )
by shelby on Monday, 18th September 2006 @ 05:50:02 PM AEST
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Written with such grace and flowing style. Feeling it through and through.

Though......

with this much talent I feel your a worthy worthwhile person. It is hard for us at times to see in ourselves what others see in us, the good beautiful soul. Shine, as you do so perfectly in this write. You have great talent.

~Michelle

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