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Array ( [sid] => 125867 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Dark Water [time] => 2006-09-17 18:33:56 [hometext] => [bodytext] => In the deep dark water’s
I stand cold and alone..
Broken wing
I stand sad and alone..
Blinded by the night
Like a lost child I can
Not see from all my
Fears of
The deep darken water’s
Cold and alone
I held my arms out for
Comfort but like a
Wounded bird
I stand alone in the deep
Dark water
Broken wings
Standing alone as if I
Was a child
Lost in the deep dark cold
Water..
Blinded by the night
Blinded by my fears..
Fears of the darken water
Broken wings..
I held my arms out for
Comfort
But like a lost child I
Stand alone..
With all my fears..
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Dark Water

Contributed by honey56 on Sunday, 17th September 2006 @ 06:33:56 PM in AEST
Topic: oops

In the deep dark water’s
I stand cold and alone..
Broken wing
I stand sad and alone..
Blinded by the night
Like a lost child I can
Not see from all my
Fears of
The deep darken water’s
Cold and alone
I held my arms out for
Comfort but like a
Wounded bird
I stand alone in the deep
Dark water
Broken wings
Standing alone as if I
Was a child
Lost in the deep dark cold
Water..
Blinded by the night
Blinded by my fears..
Fears of the darken water
Broken wings..
I held my arms out for
Comfort
But like a lost child I
Stand alone..
With all my fears..

Copyright Â© honey56 ... [ 2006-09-17 18:33:56]
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Re: Dark Water (User Rating: 1 )
by Light_to_your_Darkness on Sunday, 17th September 2006 @ 07:12:00 PM AEST
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This is very deep, I love how you emphasized the dark water. It was moving

Re: Dark Water (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Wednesday, 4th October 2006 @ 03:08:41 PM AEST
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oh so dark just the way i like it great job
in expressing your emotions
made a little tini tiny tear form in my eye
but i quickly wiped it away because as a guy
im not supposed to cry lol
you keep on writing and guess what thats right you guessed it I will be reading lol

Re: Dark Water (User Rating: 1 )
by Balmain_Tiger on Tuesday, 21st November 2006 @ 04:32:05 AM AEST
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very emotive words and feelings I hope expressing them has helped the light shine for you

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