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Array ( [sid] => 125858 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => three little words [time] => 2006-09-17 15:16:42 [hometext] => Ok this is my first poem so it isnt great. lol ..im trying to find ways to more easily express myself so here goes... [bodytext] =>
you look deep in my eyes and I lose control
any negative thoughts melt away
my heart beats fast, my heart beats slow
i feel a smile creep upon my face
i feel the pain and i miss you so...

i want to always tell you how i feel
but at your turn you hesitate, and that i can see
its as if you try to convince yourself that its real
you may think so, my baby, but you dont truly love me

i wish you knew it wasnt necessary
i cannot make someone feel as i do
if we felt the exact same it would be somewhat scary
but i still wonder if im really the one for you...

so i want you to know that until your feelings are real
please do not tell me how you feel
it causes more pain when your reaction is so slow
the fact that you truly dont love me, id rather not know








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three little words

Contributed by angelys on Sunday, 17th September 2006 @ 03:16:42 PM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry




you look deep in my eyes and I lose control
any negative thoughts melt away
my heart beats fast, my heart beats slow
i feel a smile creep upon my face
i feel the pain and i miss you so...

i want to always tell you how i feel
but at your turn you hesitate, and that i can see
its as if you try to convince yourself that its real
you may think so, my baby, but you dont truly love me

i wish you knew it wasnt necessary
i cannot make someone feel as i do
if we felt the exact same it would be somewhat scary
but i still wonder if im really the one for you...

so i want you to know that until your feelings are real
please do not tell me how you feel
it causes more pain when your reaction is so slow
the fact that you truly dont love me, id rather not know












Copyright © angelys ... [ 2006-09-17 15:16:42]
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Re: three little words (User Rating: 1 )
by twbanter on Sunday, 17th September 2006 @ 04:31:46 PM AEST
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First write? First write EVER? I don't believe that.
How fragile is true love. How delicate that emotion. How painfull? Well you just told us...

Tom W


Re: three little words (User Rating: 1 )
by BigDaddy on Sunday, 17th September 2006 @ 05:48:41 PM AEST
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Very descriptive and with great feeling. I felt as if I were re-living a part of my life 20 yrs. ago. You expressed yourself very well. If this is your first poem I would definitely encourage you to continue writing. Thanks for sharing "Three Little Words".


Re: three little words (User Rating: 1 )
by ever1der on Sunday, 17th September 2006 @ 06:02:54 PM AEST
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this would be great if it was your 100th write..wow.


Re: three little words (User Rating: 1 )
by deadheadpoet on Sunday, 17th September 2006 @ 06:57:36 PM AEST
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Well written and a feeling I'm sure many can relate to. I'm with the others here, if this is your very first write,,,,,,I look forward to seeing more. Thanks for sharing.
Peace, Laura


Re: three little words (User Rating: 1 )
by Light_to_your_Darkness on Sunday, 17th September 2006 @ 07:22:26 PM AEST
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I really enjoyed this, I can't believe it's your first :) I can't wait to see more


Re: three little words (User Rating: 1 )
by Alison on Sunday, 17th September 2006 @ 07:24:33 PM AEST
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really this is great 4 be'n your first write! this must have come right from your heart! good job!




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