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Make me
Contributed by
light_to_your_Darkness
on
Saturday, 16th September 2006 @ 02:08:28 PM in AEST
Topic:
anguished
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There is no grey, just black and white
the words you speak just make no sense
love and trust, hearts in line
the look in your eyes, it makes me tense
Don't touch my shoulder, pat my back
things just can't be true this way
covered ears and closed up eyes
bleeding souls were meant to stay
You want my love, things I don't have
blackness, fire's what I grasp
you're so persistant, let me go
or make me see, make me gasp.
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2006-09-16 14:08:28]
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Re: Make me
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by JoeDuvivier on
Saturday, 16th September 2006 @ 02:28:35 PM AEST
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| ohh damn! thats hella good haha |
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Re: Make me
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by Boobee on
Saturday, 16th September 2006 @ 02:29:57 PM AEST
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| This makes me wonder... I like this ALOT. Keep it up. |
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Re: Make me
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by Drapes on
Saturday, 16th September 2006 @ 05:36:17 PM AEST
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Interesting. [which is a compliment!]
I liked it, I can feel it,
Great job! |
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Re: Make me
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by Evangeline92 on
Saturday, 16th September 2006 @ 07:41:13 PM AEST
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| Great poem. |
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