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why
Contributed by
brokenwings
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Saturday, 16th September 2006 @ 10:34:17 AM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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why did i do this to myself
lost love that meant the world
all i wanted was something all my own
now i find my self all alone
drowning in my own tears
because i couldn't tell you my fears
all i wanted was to be held tight
so i started a huge fight
i don't know what will come next
but i know if your really gone
i might as well die too..
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2006-09-16 10:34:17]
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Re: why
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by Evangeline92 on
Saturday, 16th September 2006 @ 11:13:51 AM AEST
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| I liked this poem,It's so sad. |
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Re: why
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by shelby on
Saturday, 16th September 2006 @ 03:23:57 PM AEST
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I have read so much sadness today. You spoke volumes in a short write. Embrace the idea that the sun will shine again because it will.
huge hugs
~Michelle~ |
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Re: why
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by Drapes on
Saturday, 16th September 2006 @ 05:41:19 PM AEST
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| Short but filled with emotion and sadness. I can really relate... Great write! And take care... |
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