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Array ( [sid] => 125764 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Leaving No Evidence [time] => 2006-09-14 23:30:51 [hometext] => [bodytext] => It was there for so long
I thought it was forever
a permanent feature
to disregard with familiarity
and ignore through expectation
A small thing though it was
it stood into the light
refusing to washed away
benign to my fears
simply existing
until I could do nothing
but accept
and that’s when it changed
it came loose
and fell away
leaving no evidence
of an existence
I was forced to accept
leaving nothing good
leaving nothing bad
benign to my fears
benign to me.

7/3/06 [comments] => 5 [counter] => 205 [topic] => 21 [informant] => one-curly-fry [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 9 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => Lifepoems )

Leaving No Evidence

Contributed by one-curly-fry on Thursday, 14th September 2006 @ 11:30:51 PM in AEST
Topic: Lifepoems

It was there for so long
I thought it was forever
a permanent feature
to disregard with familiarity
and ignore through expectation
A small thing though it was
it stood into the light
refusing to washed away
benign to my fears
simply existing
until I could do nothing
but accept
and that’s when it changed
it came loose
and fell away
leaving no evidence
of an existence
I was forced to accept
leaving nothing good
leaving nothing bad
benign to my fears
benign to me.

7/3/06

Copyright Â© one-curly-fry ... [ 2006-09-14 23:30:51]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: Leaving No Evidence (User Rating: 1 )
by ever1der on Friday, 15th September 2006 @ 02:07:43 AM AEST
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sounds a lot like letting go.

Re: Leaving No Evidence (User Rating: 1 )
by Alison on Friday, 15th September 2006 @ 05:29:42 PM AEST
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hey i really like it! it is very moving and has a good strong flow to it! good write!

Re: Leaving No Evidence (User Rating: 1 )
by LonelyPoet on Friday, 22nd September 2006 @ 07:39:44 PM AEST
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the more i read of your poetry the more i realize how very honored we are to have you posting your poetry here..

Re: Leaving No Evidence (User Rating: 1 )
by Leoricx on Saturday, 14th October 2006 @ 08:00:01 AM AEST
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All too often that which we come to rely upon can just disappear. I think you've captured both parts here; the dependence and the uncertainty that follows its loss.

Good job

:D

Re: Leaving No Evidence (User Rating: 1 )
by elle on Tuesday, 15th September 2009 @ 05:04:50 PM AEST
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I do see the similarities, Tim. Although I like mine, I think I like yours' better. It's subtle.
Now, mine seems so much more graphic. (blood blister & what not. . . )
Nice piece.
~smiles~ elle

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