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Array ( [sid] => 125761 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => My Days [time] => 2006-09-14 21:58:04 [hometext] => I just can't let go [bodytext] => Give me one reason
A reason to keep on waiting
For something to change
Maybe the way you look at me
the way you touch me
Your words seem meaningless
Your looks are full of emptiness
I can't feel warmth with every embrace
And I can't feel the passion with any kiss
My days are filled with longing
for just once I wish that I knew what you really felt
Just a glimor of something we had
My days are filled with confusion
and everything I don't know
My days are filled with waiting
for absolutely nothing
My days seem worthless
With out meaning
I'm wasting my time
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My Days

Contributed by MnMnMsrcool on Thursday, 14th September 2006 @ 09:58:04 PM in AEST
Topic: SadPoetry

Give me one reason
A reason to keep on waiting
For something to change
Maybe the way you look at me
the way you touch me
Your words seem meaningless
Your looks are full of emptiness
I can't feel warmth with every embrace
And I can't feel the passion with any kiss
My days are filled with longing
for just once I wish that I knew what you really felt
Just a glimor of something we had
My days are filled with confusion
and everything I don't know
My days are filled with waiting
for absolutely nothing
My days seem worthless
With out meaning
I'm wasting my time
waiting for you

Copyright © MnMnMsrcool ... [ 2006-09-14 21:58:04]
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Re: My Days (User Rating: 1 )
by midnightwriter on Thursday, 14th September 2006 @ 10:01:00 PM AEST
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ahh i remember that feeling well. It does take time to let go. good write, nice capture of those feelings, keep trodding along...

Re: My Days (User Rating: 1 )
by Boobee on Friday, 15th September 2006 @ 12:10:52 AM AEST
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I recently felt like this... very good.

Re: My Days (User Rating: 1 )
by ever1der on Friday, 15th September 2006 @ 02:14:12 AM AEST
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feelings captured as if you wrote with blood from your heart.

Re: My Days (User Rating: 1 )
by Drapes on Friday, 15th September 2006 @ 04:26:59 PM AEST
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Oh I love the last two lines...
"I'm wasting my time
waiting for you"
Perfect!
Great write, I can really feel it.

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