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Array ( [sid] => 125724 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Blah [time] => 2006-09-14 03:06:32 [hometext] => [bodytext] => Wattup man wat's goin on tonite
I wanna do somethin dats crazy aight
hook up somewhere in town
got beats wit sweets and somewhere to get down
thats how I like to get down
gettin bored wit the same-Ol *****
take two hits and that what fits
I'm here for ya lets get in out tonite
Hit up da club up hit dat phat *** pipe
Or get a few drinks and unleash somefights
Wats happening man wat da **** goin wrong
shut up take a hit from my wicked bong
We need to figure somethin out befo our heads hang down
Lets be real wit each otha now
Cuz I don't wanna be the one to hold you down
lookin for happiness all da way
Gotsome news for ya it don't happen dat way
real wit myself and don't care wat anybody says
I'm real Inupiaq dat knows how to handle my biz
If we need somethin lets get it done tonite
Skies our gettin darker every nite
Every mornin I wake up and Thank God I'm alive
believe dat He created everythang right
Nuttin in dis world will eva shake me
gonna stand up n face satan on my own damn feet
Knock his *** down back to da ****** heat
Laugh as his soul shreaks like a freak
Soul killa dats wat my name says
Ready ta hit demons like its my biz
1 soul 2 souls keep dem runnin
Keepin dem souljas quick on dey feet




[comments] => 2 [counter] => 186 [topic] => 43 [informant] => packatack [notes] => Please read the site rules ... edited for language ... Mod 8 [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => oops )
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Contributed by packatack on Thursday, 14th September 2006 @ 03:06:32 AM in AEST
Topic: oops



Wattup man wat's goin on tonite
I wanna do somethin dats crazy aight
hook up somewhere in town
got beats wit sweets and somewhere to get down
thats how I like to get down
gettin bored wit the same-Ol *****
take two hits and that what fits
I'm here for ya lets get in out tonite
Hit up da club up hit dat phat *** pipe
Or get a few drinks and unleash somefights
Wats happening man wat da **** goin wrong
shut up take a hit from my wicked bong
We need to figure somethin out befo our heads hang down
Lets be real wit each otha now
Cuz I don't wanna be the one to hold you down
lookin for happiness all da way
Gotsome news for ya it don't happen dat way
real wit myself and don't care wat anybody says
I'm real Inupiaq dat knows how to handle my biz
If we need somethin lets get it done tonite
Skies our gettin darker every nite
Every mornin I wake up and Thank God I'm alive
believe dat He created everythang right
Nuttin in dis world will eva shake me
gonna stand up n face satan on my own damn feet
Knock his *** down back to da ****** heat
Laugh as his soul shreaks like a freak
Soul killa dats wat my name says
Ready ta hit demons like its my biz
1 soul 2 souls keep dem runnin
Keepin dem souljas quick on dey feet








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Re: Blah (User Rating: 1 )
by ItsMeNow on Saturday, 21st February 2009 @ 11:05:24 AM AEST
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Uh? ok.. Well it is all in ebonics maybe this is meant for a rap site or something?


Re: Blah (User Rating: 1 )
by ShaonKra on Monday, 23rd February 2009 @ 05:03:58 AM AEST
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A few minor mistakes but over all this is ok




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