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Array ( [sid] => 125720 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => In too Deep [time] => 2006-09-13 23:54:37 [hometext] => [bodytext] => Too deep in the shallow end,
The meaning of life is simply pretend,
I search for an answer without a question,
Trying to finish before I begin.

And I look to the stars,
And they talk to me,
They say to me,
Heaven is just a dream.

And I lose my mind,
And I mind my losses,
And I always look,
And I never find.

But I look to the stars,
And they talk to me,
They say to me,
Heaven is just a dream.

And I look around,
And I dive deep in,
There is no solid ground,
Here in the shallow end.

Again I look to the stars,
And they talk to me,
They say to me,
Heaven is just a dream.

In the shallow end,
There's Nothing but lies,
Trying to transcend,
These starry skies.

When speaking with stars,
The only truth,
Is there are no angels,
Only a reality full of abuse. [comments] => 2 [counter] => 165 [topic] => 73 [informant] => UnmovedMover [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => abstract )

In too Deep

Contributed by UnmovedMover on Wednesday, 13th September 2006 @ 11:54:37 PM in AEST
Topic: abstract

Too deep in the shallow end,
The meaning of life is simply pretend,
I search for an answer without a question,
Trying to finish before I begin.

And I look to the stars,
And they talk to me,
They say to me,
Heaven is just a dream.

And I lose my mind,
And I mind my losses,
And I always look,
And I never find.

But I look to the stars,
And they talk to me,
They say to me,
Heaven is just a dream.

And I look around,
And I dive deep in,
There is no solid ground,
Here in the shallow end.

Again I look to the stars,
And they talk to me,
They say to me,
Heaven is just a dream.

In the shallow end,
There's Nothing but lies,
Trying to transcend,
These starry skies.

When speaking with stars,
The only truth,
Is there are no angels,
Only a reality full of abuse.

Copyright © UnmovedMover ... [ 2006-09-13 23:54:37]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: In too Deep (User Rating: 1 )
by shelby on Tuesday, 26th December 2006 @ 12:02:23 AM AEST
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A beautiful poem but the end just about stunned me. Ohhhh how I can relate to this.
Looking to the stars and wanted a way out.

I found it and so can you. The hands of abuse can not capture you forever and believe me there is an angel watching over you.

Merry Christmas

Michelle

Re: In too Deep (User Rating: 1 )
by MisfitMe on Tuesday, 26th December 2006 @ 12:20:18 AM AEST
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I think that those who have been abused have to work harder at understanding themself, but in the end, this gifts us w/ the ability to better understand others.

It's a gift without compare...
that to receive, we have only to dare...

BigLoveMuchPeace,
~MisfitMe

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