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Array ( [sid] => 125690 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => 6 LETTERS [time] => 2006-09-13 12:47:51 [hometext] => well, i guess he's mad at me, and i can do nothing about it, i dont know why or how, all i know is that everything had changed lately between us, andi wish things would get back to as they were,,, i really miss him.. even when he's there infront of me... [bodytext] => 6 words,
6 letters,
today i'm hurt,
this love caused BITTER!

6 words,
6 letters,
i'm so LONELY,
alone i shiver!

LONELY is the word,
i'm so alone,
without you around,
i'm dead to bone!
why are you mad?
why are you gone???

all alone~
i read your words,
sms's~
and i cry alone~
the things you wrote,
on my papers~
i memorized them all!
all alone,
against my face, wind had blown!

i miss you madly,
cause i love you badly,
why the hell are you gone:"(?

why the hell aren't we together?
why am i alone:"(?

6 letters~
yes i'm ~*~
L O N E L Y

6 words~
i wish to say:~*~
I LOVE YOU, BE MINE~ENDLESSLY!

My dear, MY darling~
YOU made me
A L I V E !

Today i'm lonely,
so please comeback.

without you near me,
i swear to you~ I CANT JUST~*~
S U R V I V E !

[comments] => 4 [counter] => 200 [topic] => 32 [informant] => OceanZ [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 0 [associated] => [topicname] => SadPoetry )
6 LETTERS

Contributed by OceanZ on Wednesday, 13th September 2006 @ 12:47:51 PM in AEST
Topic: SadPoetry



6 words,
6 letters,
today i'm hurt,
this love caused BITTER!

6 words,
6 letters,
i'm so LONELY,
alone i shiver!

LONELY is the word,
i'm so alone,
without you around,
i'm dead to bone!
why are you mad?
why are you gone???

all alone~
i read your words,
sms's~
and i cry alone~
the things you wrote,
on my papers~
i memorized them all!
all alone,
against my face, wind had blown!

i miss you madly,
cause i love you badly,
why the hell are you gone:"(?

why the hell aren't we together?
why am i alone:"(?

6 letters~
yes i'm ~*~
L O N E L Y

6 words~
i wish to say:~*~
I LOVE YOU, BE MINE~ENDLESSLY!

My dear, MY darling~
YOU made me
A L I V E !

Today i'm lonely,
so please comeback.

without you near me,
i swear to you~ I CANT JUST~*~
S U R V I V E !





Copyright © OceanZ ... [ 2006-09-13 12:47:51]
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Re: 6 LETTERS (User Rating: 1 )
by Drapes on Wednesday, 13th September 2006 @ 04:21:30 PM AEST
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Ah do I ever know how you feel!!
Good poem with good feeling! Nice write.


Re: 6 LETTERS (User Rating: 1 )
by richcol7522 on Wednesday, 13th September 2006 @ 05:12:25 PM AEST
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I know how you feel all to well. Ive been going through something similar to this with my wife. Although we live under the same roof it is as if we dont even know each other, passing each as strangers as we live side by side. You did a very good job writting this. I hope that things get better for you.

Take care
Rich


Re: 6 LETTERS (User Rating: 1 )
by BobbyZimmerman on Wednesday, 13th September 2006 @ 06:02:08 PM AEST
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As the saying goes, "No man is worth your tears, and the one that is, will never make you cry." Nice write though, very well done.


Re: 6 LETTERS (User Rating: 1 )
by ever1der on Wednesday, 13th September 2006 @ 06:16:49 PM AEST
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good write..but begging is so degrading..




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