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[title] => I love this place!
[time] => 2006-09-13 04:43:39
[hometext] => Gotta admit, I hooked on YP.com I love it here
[bodytext] => I love this place! I can’t believe I found this place A place where we can all relate I have read so many good lines My mind is reeling Oh such feelings Laid bare Such a vulnerable thing to do And yet you do it The cost to you? Who knows the pain you bear As you write it out And your soul is bared... For me, it’s an outlet Where I can splay My silly announcements And my ridiculous tirades But the folks here listen And hear my useless screams And put up with the Things that I bleed Poetically, laid out Metaphorically There’s no doubt Some of the best Here lay themselves out Silly at times, serious rhymes It all comes out so clear When they all need an ear to hear… And isn’t it great to know That you and I are here!!! And what’s with that freggin mosquito??? Ohhhh so lets celebrate our brethren Let anyone who wants to, write in And let them all show their emotional needs Or just drivel in their own style But oh how sweet When someone so complete Gives poetry so sweet and sublime! And what a treat For us who get to read The results No matter how crazy or wild Yes this place Is home to all who’s wild And serves a purpose That lets us show the child The child within We want to hide Because we all have that Intensity inside In one big breath We sell our souls To those who read in-depth And then criticize They do this just by reading And in comments there’s no reply And that is just as painful As the silence That screams between the lines We wonder where we went wrong A criticism would have sufficed And saved our vulnerable hearts From a whole lot of strife And maybe helped us out But simply left us full of doubt But that’s what this place Is all about Err, isn’t it? [comments] => 3 [counter] => 263 [topic] => 37 [informant] => twbanter [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => ThankYouPoems )
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