Your Poetry Dot Com

Welcome to Your Poetry Dot Com - Read, Rate, Comment on, or Submit Poetry. Browse Poetry Forums, or just enjoy other parts of our poetic community.
One of the largest databases of poetry on the net, now over 198,500+ poems!

Poems On Site: 198,500+ Comments On Poems: 427,000+ Forum Posts: 105,000+

Custom Search


Welcome !	Home · FAQ · Topics · Web Links · Your Account · Submit Poetry · Top 30 · OldSite Link	29-May 12:49:27 AEST

Menu

· Our eBay Store

· Error Submit

Poetry

· Submit Poetry

· Least Read Poems

· Members Listing

· Old Site Post 2001

· Old Site Pre 2001

· Poetry Archive

· Public Domain Poetry

Stories

· Stories (NEW ! )

· Submit Story

· Story Topics

· Stories Archive

· Story Search

Community

· Our Poetry Forums

· Our Arcade
100's of Games !

Site Help

· FAQ

· Feedback

Members Areas

· Your Account

· Members Journals

· Premium Sign-Up

Premium Section

· Special Section

· Premium Poems

· Premium Submit

· Premium Search

· Premium Archive

· Premium Topics

Fun & Games

· Jokes

· Bubble Puzzle

· Cross Word Easy

· Word Hunt

Reference

· Dictionary (Rhyming)

· Site Updates

· Special Content

Search

Top

Help This Site

· Donations

Others

· Moderators

Our Other Sites

· Embroidery Design Store
· Your Jokes
· Special Urls
· JM Embroideries
· Public Domain Poetry and Stories
· Diamond Dotz
· Cooking Info and Recipes
· Quoof - Australian Story

Social

Array ( [sid] => 125658 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Into Death [time] => 2006-09-12 16:58:25 [hometext] => I wrote this after one of our many, many fights... [bodytext] => I hate you
And this life
I'm through with disappointment,
Anger and strife

Self-inflicted pain
Just to satisfy
My tormented mind
And to bring the tears I cannot cry

You say you love me
But I know it's not true
I'm a big letdown
In everything I do

Kill me, please
Little boxcutter
Spare me future pain
Then I begin to stutter

"I'm so sorry
I had to leave
But I wasn't being selfish
It is that you must believe"

Last thought,
Last breath
Here I go
Into death

~~ [comments] => 2 [counter] => 167 [topic] => 36 [informant] => lilbabe [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => Suicide )

Into Death

Contributed by lilbabe on Tuesday, 12th September 2006 @ 04:58:25 PM in AEST
Topic: Suicide

I hate you
And this life
I'm through with disappointment,
Anger and strife

Self-inflicted pain
Just to satisfy
My tormented mind
And to bring the tears I cannot cry

You say you love me
But I know it's not true
I'm a big letdown
In everything I do

Kill me, please
Little boxcutter
Spare me future pain
Then I begin to stutter

"I'm so sorry
I had to leave
But I wasn't being selfish
It is that you must believe"

Last thought,
Last breath
Here I go
Into death

~~

Copyright © lilbabe ... [ 2006-09-12 16:58:25]
(Date/Time posted on site)

Advertisments:

Previous Posted Poem | | Next Posted Poem

Sorry, comments are no longer allowed for anonymous, please register for a free membership to access this feature and more

All comments are owned by the poster. Your Poetry Dot Com is not responsible for the content of any comment.
That said, if you find an offensive comment, please contact via the FeedBack Form with details, including poem title etc.

Re: Into Death (User Rating: 1 )
by Uncertain_Oblivion on Tuesday, 12th September 2006 @ 05:39:33 PM AEST
(User Info | Send a Message)

I loved this...and this part was my favorite...

"Last thought,
Last breath
Here I go
Into death"

Kick ass...

Re: Into Death (User Rating: 1 )
by shelby on Tuesday, 12th September 2006 @ 06:36:51 PM AEST
(User Info | Send a Message)

First of all, the flow and style are incredible.
The message is so emotional and sad your heart bled onto the page.

Second, I sure hope this is all poetic storming and this isnt how your really feeling, that would make me feel very sad.

Welcome to YPDC

Michelle

While every care is taken to ensure the general sites content is family safe, our moderators cannot be in all places; all the time. Please report poetry and or comments that are in breach of our site rules HERE (Please include poem title or url). Parents also please ensure that you supervise your children well when they are on the internet; regardless of what a site says about being, or being considered, child-safe.

Poetry is much like a great photo, a single "moment in time" capturing many feelings and emotions. Yet, they are very alive; creating stirrings within the readers who form visual "pictures" of the expressed emotions within the Poem. ©

Opinions expressed in the poetry, comments, forums etc. on this site are not necessarily those of this site, its owners and/or operators; but of the individuals who post items to this site.
Frequently Asked Questions | | | Privacy Policy | | | Contact Webmaster

All submitted items are Copyright © to their submitter. All the rest Copyright © 2002-2050 by Your Poetry Dot Com

All logos and trademarks in this site are property of their respective owners.

Script Generation Time: 0.052 Seconds. - View our Site Map | .© your-poetry.com