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Array ( [sid] => 125653 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Heavens windows [time] => 2006-09-12 16:12:33 [hometext] => My brother died the day after my 17th Birthday so i wrote this on the plane ride to South Carolina! [bodytext] => It hasn't been that long

since i moved up to heaven

packed my bags and left

with an eviction

Its the closest to you

that I could get

i think i did pretty good

for what i had to work with

sorry about the short notice

believe me, i was shocked too

but when the big man says its time

theres nothing you can do

i know that you will miss me

and you know that ill miss you

i wanted to spend our lifes together

but atleast i can watch over you

Don't worrie yourself about me

for i will be just fine

i won't worrie about you

I will be watching throught the shine

i will see you when your crying

but believe me you won't be crying alone

im the reason it rains when you cry
and i have finally found my home

The years will feel like forever

the more you think about it

dont let it get the best of you

the years will pass but i won't forget

i wanted to let you know

so maybe you wouldn't cry

go on ahead with your life

this is not yet a goodbye

i will watch you close

and not always will you know

but i will do my best to give you a sign

when im looking out heavens window

It could be a lady bug

a lily or warmth, but just know

I will be watching over you

heaven has quite a few windows

i won't step away

i will never let you go

as long as you keep hold of me

ill be right there at heavens window

and i will see everything

a tear when you are low

i will send warmth and comfort

through heavens window

So when you look up to the sky

and your wonder whats through the holes

look close and you will see me

at everyone of heavens windows

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Heavens windows

Contributed by kasean on Tuesday, 12th September 2006 @ 04:12:33 PM in AEST
Topic: goodbyepoetry



It hasn't been that long

since i moved up to heaven

packed my bags and left

with an eviction

Its the closest to you

that I could get

i think i did pretty good

for what i had to work with

sorry about the short notice

believe me, i was shocked too

but when the big man says its time

theres nothing you can do

i know that you will miss me

and you know that ill miss you

i wanted to spend our lifes together

but atleast i can watch over you

Don't worrie yourself about me

for i will be just fine

i won't worrie about you

I will be watching throught the shine

i will see you when your crying

but believe me you won't be crying alone

im the reason it rains when you cry
and i have finally found my home

The years will feel like forever

the more you think about it

dont let it get the best of you

the years will pass but i won't forget

i wanted to let you know

so maybe you wouldn't cry

go on ahead with your life

this is not yet a goodbye

i will watch you close

and not always will you know

but i will do my best to give you a sign

when im looking out heavens window

It could be a lady bug

a lily or warmth, but just know

I will be watching over you

heaven has quite a few windows

i won't step away

i will never let you go

as long as you keep hold of me

ill be right there at heavens window

and i will see everything

a tear when you are low

i will send warmth and comfort

through heavens window

So when you look up to the sky

and your wonder whats through the holes

look close and you will see me

at everyone of heavens windows





Copyright © kasean ... [ 2006-09-12 16:12:33]
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Re: Heavens windows (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Tuesday, 12th September 2006 @ 09:24:25 PM AEST
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awww...very sad and i'm sorry for your loss. good poem.


Re: Heavens windows (User Rating: 1 )
by lillyjane on Wednesday, 13th September 2006 @ 04:46:52 AM AEST
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So sad, may be he was sending you that message through your mind.. I think sometimes we do get a message and dont realize our selves when we write.. xxx

Lovely poem.




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