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Array ( [sid] => 125641 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Streaming Thoughts To Death [time] => 2006-09-12 09:43:29 [hometext] => [bodytext] => I feel like a monster,
made with bones,
covered in skin and flesh,
my insides drowning in blood and gore
and beneath it all,
I feel like a monster.

I am a monster.

He says to me, "Beautiful beautiful blue girl
how could you not die here,
beneath the twilight sky,
without the cosmos ripping you apart,
constructing your nightmares into dreams,
My God! How could you breathe?"

Because I never could.

It's beautiful, It's Victorian
it makes me notice he has fire for eyes
and scars for a heart.
He's my black hole
and I feel * * * * * * * * standing next to him.

I'm true blue.

I swear I don't know what happened that day,
that night,
that morning when the sky exploded into red
and the bombs started falling,
but, I think I was holding your hand when the world died.

I think I almost forgot your name.

And it drove me mad,
I tried to kiss it all better,
but I think you knew I was just stalling.
I was trying to make up the moves as I went along
and somehow I thought I could fool you,
but, you asked me to call you by your name.

I forgot you were always looking at me through mirrors.

"My God! My God! Why hast thou forsaken me?!?!
Girl. How much you've grown into a woman.
And yet how dead you look still,
like halloween in leather,
and as pale as the face of the moon."
~~THIS IS A KIND OF SYNTHETIC LOVE/HATE RELATIONSHIP BETWEEN RELIGION AND FASHION RIPPING EACH OTHER TO SHREDS ALL IN THE NAME OF...LOVE.~~

Slicing your wrists in half, I forget how to sew, so I use glue instead.

Yes, yes, I'm a monster, but I'm your monster.
It's really late, at 3:00 or something.
I sleep naked wishing you were here to hold me
because I've never been so alone in my life
and I've never been so aware that this lonliness is going to kill me.

I"ve been so absentminded lately.

Oh! But what a beautiful death it shall be.
All winter and ice,
morning becoming afternoon to night,
freezing to death in the ice, and the color...

Dead blue.

For now though, I shall go.
I shall write you later.

Promise.
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Streaming Thoughts To Death

Contributed by Uncertain_Oblivion on Tuesday, 12th September 2006 @ 09:43:29 AM in AEST
Topic: Suicide



I feel like a monster,
made with bones,
covered in skin and flesh,
my insides drowning in blood and gore
and beneath it all,
I feel like a monster.

I am a monster.

He says to me, "Beautiful beautiful blue girl
how could you not die here,
beneath the twilight sky,
without the cosmos ripping you apart,
constructing your nightmares into dreams,
My God! How could you breathe?"

Because I never could.

It's beautiful, It's Victorian
it makes me notice he has fire for eyes
and scars for a heart.
He's my black hole
and I feel * * * * * * * * standing next to him.

I'm true blue.

I swear I don't know what happened that day,
that night,
that morning when the sky exploded into red
and the bombs started falling,
but, I think I was holding your hand when the world died.

I think I almost forgot your name.

And it drove me mad,
I tried to kiss it all better,
but I think you knew I was just stalling.
I was trying to make up the moves as I went along
and somehow I thought I could fool you,
but, you asked me to call you by your name.

I forgot you were always looking at me through mirrors.

"My God! My God! Why hast thou forsaken me?!?!
Girl. How much you've grown into a woman.
And yet how dead you look still,
like halloween in leather,
and as pale as the face of the moon."
~~THIS IS A KIND OF SYNTHETIC LOVE/HATE RELATIONSHIP BETWEEN RELIGION AND FASHION RIPPING EACH OTHER TO SHREDS ALL IN THE NAME OF...LOVE.~~

Slicing your wrists in half, I forget how to sew, so I use glue instead.

Yes, yes, I'm a monster, but I'm your monster.
It's really late, at 3:00 or something.
I sleep naked wishing you were here to hold me
because I've never been so alone in my life
and I've never been so aware that this lonliness is going to kill me.

I"ve been so absentminded lately.

Oh! But what a beautiful death it shall be.
All winter and ice,
morning becoming afternoon to night,
freezing to death in the ice, and the color...

Dead blue.

For now though, I shall go.
I shall write you later.

Promise.




Copyright © Uncertain_Oblivion ... [ 2006-09-12 09:43:29]
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Re: Streaming Thoughts To Death (User Rating: 1 )
by ever1der on Tuesday, 12th September 2006 @ 11:44:32 AM AEST
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a bit long for my attention span..but it was filled with nice imagery.


Re: Streaming Thoughts To Death (User Rating: 1 )
by Lilbabe on Tuesday, 12th September 2006 @ 05:11:53 PM AEST
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it had a weird form but i liked it. it did have good imagery.


lex


Re: Streaming Thoughts To Death (User Rating: 1 )
by Faust on Tuesday, 12th September 2006 @ 09:51:23 PM AEST
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I love this poem. The sense of sorrow and insecurity is really well expressed. It truly hits those of us who feel the same way. I love the line that says "Slicing your wrists in half, I forget how to sew, so I use glue instead." I want to get that tattoed now.

Eternally Punished,
Faust



Re: Streaming Thoughts To Death (User Rating: 1 )
by TwistedCage on Saturday, 23rd September 2006 @ 12:46:18 PM AEST
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This was a wonderful write. So many different avenues of expression, and you put them together briliantly. I loved the imagery as well.

Great write!




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