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Array ( [sid] => 125632 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => First Kiss [time] => 2006-09-12 03:27:53 [hometext] => This is a poem I wrote when I gathered every ounce of courage I could find just to kiss my bestfriend, Ms. Jenna Paola Alvarez, and finally let her know that in my eyes, she will never be just a mere friend... Comments appreciated. [bodytext] => Am I just a friend or something more?
I have never felt this way before
I know I'm yours, but are you mine?
What can I do to cross this line?
This border of being just your friend
Is there any way to put an end?

Am I crazy? Or misunderstood?
Too much thinking will do me no good
I know I love you, but, do you?
Is there anything I can do?
To let you know how I feel, somehow
Doesn't matter, I'll just kiss you now

What happens next, I don't really care
I just know that I'll always be there
To be your friend, and something more
Much more than what you're hoping for
My heart knows that I want to do this
Our friendship ends now, with this first kiss.

~ Butch Corpuz ~
~ Betrayer of Hope ~ [comments] => 2 [counter] => 223 [topic] => 2 [informant] => ButchCorpuz [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 4 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LovePoetry )

First Kiss

Contributed by ButchCorpuz on Tuesday, 12th September 2006 @ 03:27:53 AM in AEST
Topic: LovePoetry

Am I just a friend or something more?
I have never felt this way before
I know I'm yours, but are you mine?
What can I do to cross this line?
This border of being just your friend
Is there any way to put an end?

Am I crazy? Or misunderstood?
Too much thinking will do me no good
I know I love you, but, do you?
Is there anything I can do?
To let you know how I feel, somehow
Doesn't matter, I'll just kiss you now

What happens next, I don't really care
I just know that I'll always be there
To be your friend, and something more
Much more than what you're hoping for
My heart knows that I want to do this
Our friendship ends now, with this first kiss.

~ Butch Corpuz ~
~ Betrayer of Hope ~

Copyright © ButchCorpuz ... [ 2006-09-12 03:27:53]
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Re: First Kiss (User Rating: 1 )
by Shmokin on Tuesday, 12th September 2006 @ 03:30:52 AM AEST
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Such a painful dicotomy to be in, nice write, thanx for sharing :-)

Re: First Kiss (User Rating: 1 )
by Drapes on Wednesday, 13th September 2006 @ 04:15:50 PM AEST
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Oh, wow. Great emotion, I can really feel whats going on. And I have experienced what you're talking about. As of right now, me and him are having huge problems... but that doesn't necessarily mean that that's how it will turn out for you.
So I especially love this poem because I'm going through it, but I also love your style of writing!
Great job!

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