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Array ( [sid] => 12562 [catid] => 1 [aid] => Mick [title] => Dreams [time] => 2003-02-13 18:40:00 [hometext] => written for daddy [bodytext] => I believe that you
can carry me away.
I know you don't believe me
so push me away.
But it is you
that makes me think.
So I'll plead with you,
how can I make you believe?

This conversation is stupid
but I won't forget it.
I'll try again
just for you to believe.
Just don't laugh
and don't talk bad about me.
Don't ignore me
and don't crush my dreams.

But it is you
that makes me cry.
But I'll stick with you
until the day that I die.
How can I make you
believe in me?
And how can I make you
see in my dreams?

You make me feel useless,
you make me feel unworthy,
you make me feel wrong
but I will make you see.
That I am worth it
and I'll prove it.
That what you worry about
is nothing at all. [comments] => 2 [counter] => 160 [topic] => 32 [informant] => isaiyan [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => SadPoetry )

Dreams

Contributed by isaiyan on Thursday, 13th February 2003 @ 06:40:00 PM in AEST
Topic: SadPoetry

I believe that you
can carry me away.
I know you don't believe me
so push me away.
But it is you
that makes me think.
So I'll plead with you,
how can I make you believe?

This conversation is stupid
but I won't forget it.
I'll try again
just for you to believe.
Just don't laugh
and don't talk bad about me.
Don't ignore me
and don't crush my dreams.

But it is you
that makes me cry.
But I'll stick with you
until the day that I die.
How can I make you
believe in me?
And how can I make you
see in my dreams?

You make me feel useless,
you make me feel unworthy,
you make me feel wrong
but I will make you see.
That I am worth it
and I'll prove it.
That what you worry about
is nothing at all.

Copyright © isaiyan ... [ 2003-02-13 18:40:00]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: Dreams (User Rating: 1 )
by spooky on Friday, 14th February 2003 @ 06:38:00 AM AEST
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i know how you feel,,my parnts did me that way,,an i had to leave,,but your strong,,keep yourwords even stronger,,well written,,a frend in words,,spooky

Re: Dreams (User Rating: 1 )
by polaris773 on Tuesday, 3rd August 2010 @ 12:12:00 PM AEST
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strong write

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