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Array ( [sid] => 12553 [catid] => 1 [aid] => Mick [title] => Broken Promises [time] => 2003-02-13 14:00:00 [hometext] => maybe this is what happens when someone steels your heart and leaves you not knowing weather they really are true or not [bodytext] => You've left me standing here,
Not knowing what to do,
You asked me once if i would consider,
Remarrying if i were asked,
I said if the right man came along,
I'd gladly say I do,
Of course at the time I was referring to you.

Seems so many times lately,
You do not understand,
How lonely I feel,
Standing as I am.

Once you made me the happiest,
I have ever been before,
For you were the one who took my heart,
Made me feel special,
Made me feel whole and loved,
You returned all the love i gave,
One hundred percent and more.

Now I feel full of sadness,
Waiting to hear from you,
Sometimes I sit and ponder,
Looking at the stars above,
Wondering if you love me truely.

I don't want disappointments,
I don't want to be left feeling blue,
Most of all I don't want to lose you.

Most of all I have to say,
I don't want the broken promises,
You've already made,
Telling my son,
That in thirteen sleeps,
You promised you would be here with us,
How sad to break a promise to a little lad.

There's so much confusion,
Going through my mind,
The lack of contact,
Makes me ohh so sad,
One minute I'm on a high,
When you say you love me,
And you'll be here with us soon,
But when days turn into months,
It makes me wonder,
If you're really true.

So cast me no tails and cast me no lies,
Make my days full of sweet tomorrows,
Please be here soon with us babe. [comments] => 6 [counter] => 200 [topic] => 48 [informant] => kangarose [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 9 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => EmotionalPoetry )
Broken Promises

Contributed by kangarose on Thursday, 13th February 2003 @ 02:00:00 PM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry



You've left me standing here,
Not knowing what to do,
You asked me once if i would consider,
Remarrying if i were asked,
I said if the right man came along,
I'd gladly say I do,
Of course at the time I was referring to you.

Seems so many times lately,
You do not understand,
How lonely I feel,
Standing as I am.

Once you made me the happiest,
I have ever been before,
For you were the one who took my heart,
Made me feel special,
Made me feel whole and loved,
You returned all the love i gave,
One hundred percent and more.

Now I feel full of sadness,
Waiting to hear from you,
Sometimes I sit and ponder,
Looking at the stars above,
Wondering if you love me truely.

I don't want disappointments,
I don't want to be left feeling blue,
Most of all I don't want to lose you.

Most of all I have to say,
I don't want the broken promises,
You've already made,
Telling my son,
That in thirteen sleeps,
You promised you would be here with us,
How sad to break a promise to a little lad.

There's so much confusion,
Going through my mind,
The lack of contact,
Makes me ohh so sad,
One minute I'm on a high,
When you say you love me,
And you'll be here with us soon,
But when days turn into months,
It makes me wonder,
If you're really true.

So cast me no tails and cast me no lies,
Make my days full of sweet tomorrows,
Please be here soon with us babe.




Copyright © kangarose ... [ 2003-02-13 14:00:00]
(Date/Time posted on site)





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Re: Broken Promises (User Rating: 1 )
by LadyDama on Thursday, 13th February 2003 @ 02:14:11 PM AEST
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this is sad... been here before... my husband and i had a difficult beginning... but now we have almost 5 years... each day is precious, and months should never go by... thank you for a heartfelt poem...


Re: Broken Promises (User Rating: 1 )
by Jenni_Kalicharan on Thursday, 13th February 2003 @ 02:37:54 PM AEST
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Lovely, but so, so sad....
Jenni


Re: Broken Promises (User Rating: 1 )
by ed on Thursday, 13th February 2003 @ 03:41:01 PM AEST
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I'm sorry. Well done for sharing. Be strong. Well Written. Thanks


Re: Broken Promises (User Rating: 1 )
by ladyfawn on Thursday, 13th February 2003 @ 08:27:15 PM AEST
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awwww big huggs and much love roo, always nessa


Re: Broken Promises (User Rating: 1 )
by blueheart on Thursday, 13th February 2003 @ 11:11:21 PM AEST
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Very nicely witten. Tugs at my heartstrings.


Re: Broken Promises (User Rating: 1 )
by riverofwords on Sunday, 16th February 2003 @ 06:23:38 AM AEST
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out of real heartbreak comes a beautiful but sad poem..
beautiful and hugs to you
i hoped by writing this poem it helped yuo a little

peace be your journey
terry




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