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[sid] => 12549
[catid] => 1
[aid] => Mick
[title] => Hell
[time] => 2003-02-13 12:00:00
[hometext] => my ancient perception of what would happen were i to take my own life... i no longer believe there is a devil... but at the time, "it" was very real...
[bodytext] => Painful & willing
You clamber up the scattered staircase The rush of marvel fills your head as you notice the blood-stained ceiling ~clots of black are cascading down You push your way through the iron door as memories drift back the sense of nostalgia hot in your mind What was that? that sound you heard coming from above the molasses ceiling... (boom, bang, crash) Shaking your head, you move on, closer & closer to the screaming desire The iron door slams behind you & for a moment, Visions of lollipops dance in your head & Life is as before (boom, bang, crash) Reality swims back in You trudge on & on through the brown muck collecting on the floor as the noise bellows on with rage Then, suddenly~red Everywhere is red; burning, hot, red Points & spikes emerge from below crusty surfaces & screams of pain & desire collide as one Surges of emotion plummet throughout your veins as your fingers beg forgiveness Oh, but it's too late~much too late (We're sorry, but this is your destination) You walk to the end of the line Wrists, still stained & torn & scarred are bursting once again Behold, the Great One on his throne of coals & rocks His spear, with a triple-forked tongue held upright ~between his long, blistered claws Nails of pure black, puncture your side slitting open the meaty flesh The blood runs thick down your tendons & the Great One roars with laughter ~evil wicked laughter Gouging deeper & deeper 'til your heart is screaming in mortified pain You claw & rip at the Great One's eyes~ to no avail ~the laughter again (boom, bang, crash) Farther down You're sinking into Nothingness No forgiveness~no care~no...no...no...NO! Welcome~ this is Hell September 26, 1990 [comments] => 3 [counter] => 172 [topic] => 36 [informant] => LadyDama [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => Suicide )
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