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Wake I must, time and sand.
Feet running upon the ground.
Birds are hungry, looking profound.
Busy ,early morning traffic view.
Smell the exhaust---- PHeeeeewwwwwww.
What is in the morning news.
War,taxes,vote,point of view,
market,songs of the blue.
Whats going on in the pew.
Over the hill is a new world view.
Crazy world-one sided view. [comments] => 8 [counter] => 969 [topic] => 21 [informant] => poewhit [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 10 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => Lifepoems )

A NEW DAY

Contributed by poewhit on Friday, 8th September 2006 @ 06:00:34 AM in AEST
Topic: Lifepoems

Day rises over the land.
Wake I must, time and sand.
Feet running upon the ground.
Birds are hungry, looking profound.
Busy ,early morning traffic view.
Smell the exhaust---- PHeeeeewwwwwww.
What is in the morning news.
War,taxes,vote,point of view,
market,songs of the blue.
Whats going on in the pew.
Over the hill is a new world view.
Crazy world-one sided view.

Copyright © poewhit ... [ 2006-09-08 06:00:34]
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Re: A NEW DAY (User Rating: 1 )
by twbanter on Friday, 8th September 2006 @ 08:24:43 AM AEST
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I didn't not read this poem, and found it very reflective. It spewed forth negativity, in fine flowing lines. Good write.

Tom W

Re: A NEW DAY (User Rating: 1 )
by deadheadpoet on Thursday, 25th January 2007 @ 08:50:24 PM AEST
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Decided to come check out your page, after reading that great poem you posted today and the kind explanation you PM'ed me with. I see you are a writer very much aware of your surroundings. Some folks walk the streets it would seem oblivious, not you my friend. I'd say your eyes and heart are wide open. I must read more,
.Peace, Laura

Re: A NEW DAY (User Rating: 1 )
by willwinuk on Wednesday, 28th November 2007 @ 08:57:58 AM AEST
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I like this poem, it's quite a different style.

Re: A NEW DAY (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Saturday, 23rd February 2008 @ 01:30:35 PM AEST
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Good write. The negative vibe it gives off satifies me. (Especially the mention of politics)

:)

Re: A NEW DAY (User Rating: 1 )
by 3660Days on Sunday, 5th April 2009 @ 07:27:15 PM AEST
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i like the opening lines best

Re: A NEW DAY (User Rating: 1 )
by 3660Days on Sunday, 5th April 2009 @ 07:29:42 PM AEST
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i like the opening lines best

Re: A NEW DAY (User Rating: 1 )
by DoubleS on Monday, 2nd August 2010 @ 03:20:10 PM AEST
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Very good keep it up

Re: A NEW DAY (User Rating: 1 )
by DoubleS on Thursday, 18th November 2010 @ 02:17:16 PM AEST
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Good Job... Keep it up

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