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Array ( [sid] => 125449 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => What You Do To Me [time] => 2006-09-07 16:21:08 [hometext] => [bodytext] => In a dim lit room
I sit alone,
Playing this song again.

I know every word,
It's all about you.
My heart it will defend.

A tear rolls down
When I confess
You're my only one.

The chorus screams
My heart to you,
This song has only begun.

Verse two is slow,
It's telling you
That you're killing me.

Shouldn't need a song
To realize that,
Just take a look and see.

I've bent and broke.
I'm just too fragile
For your careless touch.

These lyrics murder.
I push stop.
This song is just too much.

Now silently
I sit alone.
A tear drops from my eye.

Reach in my closet,
Take it out
And begin with just a sigh.

I carve your name
Deep inside,
There's nothing else to do.

Luscious red
Comes flowing out,
Here's my cure from you.

Do you see
What you do to me?
I don't need to say.

Scars and tears,
Dark red stains,
You kill me everyday.

You get to me,
You're in control
Of everything I do.

But in the end,
All I can say
Is that I still love you.

9.6.06
You are my only one [comments] => 2 [counter] => 204 [topic] => 72 [informant] => Drapes [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => self-harmpoetry )

What You Do To Me

Contributed by Drapes on Thursday, 7th September 2006 @ 04:21:08 PM in AEST
Topic: self-harmpoetry

In a dim lit room
I sit alone,
Playing this song again.

I know every word,
It's all about you.
My heart it will defend.

A tear rolls down
When I confess
You're my only one.

The chorus screams
My heart to you,
This song has only begun.

Verse two is slow,
It's telling you
That you're killing me.

Shouldn't need a song
To realize that,
Just take a look and see.

I've bent and broke.
I'm just too fragile
For your careless touch.

These lyrics murder.
I push stop.
This song is just too much.

Now silently
I sit alone.
A tear drops from my eye.

Reach in my closet,
Take it out
And begin with just a sigh.

I carve your name
Deep inside,
There's nothing else to do.

Luscious red
Comes flowing out,
Here's my cure from you.

Do you see
What you do to me?
I don't need to say.

Scars and tears,
Dark red stains,
You kill me everyday.

You get to me,
You're in control
Of everything I do.

But in the end,
All I can say
Is that I still love you.

9.6.06
You are my only one

Copyright © Drapes ... [ 2006-09-07 16:21:08]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: What You Do To Me (User Rating: 1 )
by Lilbabe on Thursday, 7th September 2006 @ 07:52:30 PM AEST
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another good one...keep 'em coming. i really enjoy your poetry. you just may be one of my favorite poets.

lex

Re: What You Do To Me (User Rating: 1 )
by ashleigh on Sunday, 4th March 2007 @ 04:11:48 PM AEST
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AAAAnd that made me cry. This was so beautiful, and it radiates feeling and sorrow, and I love it. Keep it up.

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