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Like learning everything around You

I like those crystal loving eyes
When You look at me and smile

I like Your look when I?m approaching
Knowing what?s to come

I like to hold You tightly
To feel your body sink into mine

I like to feel You touch
Stroking each millimetre of Your skin

I like to feel Your feelings duel
When Your breath starts to grow

I Like to hear Your pleading whisper
When You no longer can hold Your feelings

I like to feel Your passion
To feel Your heart beat mixed with mine

I like the feel of delight
The pleasant complete surrender

By Fernanda F. Rocha

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Passions Surrender

Contributed by Fernanda_F_Rocha on Thursday, 7th September 2006 @ 05:46:02 AM in AEST
Topic: LovePoetry

I Like that absorbing look You have
Like learning everything around You

I like those crystal loving eyes
When You look at me and smile

I like Your look when I?m approaching
Knowing what?s to come

I like to hold You tightly
To feel your body sink into mine

I like to feel You touch
Stroking each millimetre of Your skin

I like to feel Your feelings duel
When Your breath starts to grow

I Like to hear Your pleading whisper
When You no longer can hold Your feelings

I like to feel Your passion
To feel Your heart beat mixed with mine

I like the feel of delight
The pleasant complete surrender

By Fernanda F. Rocha

Copyright © Fernanda_F_Rocha ... [ 2006-09-07 05:46:02]
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Re: Passions Surrender (User Rating: 1 )
by annoiosa on Thursday, 7th September 2006 @ 01:15:54 PM AEST
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How sweet :)

Re: Passions Surrender (User Rating: 1 )
by alasdaircairns on Thursday, 7th September 2006 @ 01:39:24 PM AEST
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Sweet indeed. sounds like you're in lurvveee. Lovely piece. He sure sounds like a lucky guy.x

Re: Passions Surrender (User Rating: 1 )
by Fernanda_F_Rocha on Thursday, 7th September 2006 @ 03:10:21 PM AEST
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Thank You Alasdair and Annoiosa :)

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