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Array ( [sid] => 125417 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Domestic Abuse [time] => 2006-09-06 21:28:24 [hometext] => Nobody deserves a relationship like this. The poem was just random... [bodytext] => Create my actions
Through your hate
Call it love,
I'll take the bait

Lure me in
Sleep with me
Feel no emotion,
No pain or empathy

Hurt this fragile body
Break every little bone
Do it when you're sober,
Even drunk or stoned

Tell me I deserved it
I have bathed in sin
Another reason to hit me
Go ahead, do it again

Too weak to fight
Or feel any pain
I'll just hide my face and bruises
Swallowed by my shame [comments] => 4 [counter] => 179 [topic] => 65 [informant] => lilbabe [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => toughstuff )
Domestic Abuse

Contributed by lilbabe on Wednesday, 6th September 2006 @ 09:28:24 PM in AEST
Topic: toughstuff



Create my actions
Through your hate
Call it love,
I'll take the bait

Lure me in
Sleep with me
Feel no emotion,
No pain or empathy

Hurt this fragile body
Break every little bone
Do it when you're sober,
Even drunk or stoned

Tell me I deserved it
I have bathed in sin
Another reason to hit me
Go ahead, do it again

Too weak to fight
Or feel any pain
I'll just hide my face and bruises
Swallowed by my shame




Copyright © lilbabe ... [ 2006-09-06 21:28:24]
(Date/Time posted on site)





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Re: Domestic Abuse (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Wednesday, 6th September 2006 @ 10:04:47 PM AEST
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Unfortunatly this happens way to often.
Great wrting.
huggs,
emy


Re: Domestic Abuse (User Rating: 1 )
by ever1der on Wednesday, 6th September 2006 @ 11:33:48 PM AEST
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hoping this is just your muse talking; if not run like hell to a shelter.
mary


Re: Domestic Abuse (User Rating: 1 )
by BobbyZimmerman on Thursday, 7th September 2006 @ 04:27:24 PM AEST
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Very well-written, I love the defiance. And in response to your comment on my write....keep hanging in there.


Re: Domestic Abuse (User Rating: 1 )
by soulsearching43 on Wednesday, 7th February 2007 @ 10:23:06 PM AEST
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very powerful stuff beautifully written
would you check out The first wife and let me know what you think




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