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Array ( [sid] => 125393 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Promise [time] => 2006-09-06 15:38:50 [hometext] => [bodytext] => I face into the wind
It brushes through my hair
I close my eyes and wish
And suddenly, you're there

Your spirit fills my heart
Your memory holds my hand
Leading me to the edge
To be together, like we planned

I cut through the clouds
As love lifts me in the air
Your promise gives me hope
Releasing me from despair

Gently I start to fall
Down towards the sea
I whisper your name
As I am set free

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Promise

Contributed by xXxmegsxXx on Wednesday, 6th September 2006 @ 03:38:50 PM in AEST
Topic: Suicide

I face into the wind
It brushes through my hair
I close my eyes and wish
And suddenly, you're there

Your spirit fills my heart
Your memory holds my hand
Leading me to the edge
To be together, like we planned

I cut through the clouds
As love lifts me in the air
Your promise gives me hope
Releasing me from despair

Gently I start to fall
Down towards the sea
I whisper your name
As I am set free

Copyright © xXxmegsxXx ... [ 2006-09-06 15:38:50]
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Re: Promise (User Rating: 1 )
by Skinney86 on Wednesday, 6th September 2006 @ 04:03:29 PM AEST
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This is an uplifting and heartfelt poem. I wish there was a little more. But great write!

Re: Promise (User Rating: 1 )
by xXxmegsxXx on Wednesday, 6th September 2006 @ 04:12:17 PM AEST
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hum yes, i think you're right, it does need a bit more. this verse goes on the end

I plunge through the waves
Water replaces air
In death we'll stay as one
Life was not as fair

Re: Promise (User Rating: 1 )
by In_a_while on Wednesday, 6th September 2006 @ 05:38:51 PM AEST
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great writing... it has the feeling of a soft pillow. it
rhymed well and the added verse was exceptionally
graphic as well. Keep it up.

Re: Promise (User Rating: 1 )
by Drapes on Thursday, 14th September 2006 @ 04:56:49 PM AEST
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This is beautiful. Touching. Amazing write!

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