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feeling lost and dragged like a fish on a hook trying to fight the will to die
cold metal in my hand one flash and a life time of hurt gone without a trace
slowly i crawl off the floor of regreat and imbrace the future on understanding
like a cold hand of death to close to not notice a inner voice screams from within
live it says live for the way the flowers grow bloom not rot grow not die
rmemeber that in time of need there was always someone there
not this empty that you feel now and he is right the voice tell truth
in this neon world
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lies,love and a neon nightlight

Contributed by lostrelic on Tuesday, 5th September 2006 @ 01:21:23 PM in AEST
Topic: oops

in this darkened soul wondering threw lost images of old love and older hate
feeling lost and dragged like a fish on a hook trying to fight the will to die
cold metal in my hand one flash and a life time of hurt gone without a trace
slowly i crawl off the floor of regreat and imbrace the future on understanding
like a cold hand of death to close to not notice a inner voice screams from within
live it says live for the way the flowers grow bloom not rot grow not die
rmemeber that in time of need there was always someone there
not this empty that you feel now and he is right the voice tell truth
in this neon world

Copyright © lostrelic ... [ 2006-09-05 13:21:23]
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Re: lies,love and a neon nightlight (User Rating: 1 )
by Rhei76 on Tuesday, 5th September 2006 @ 06:17:42 PM AEST
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I like it. not quite up to speed on what you're saying.
but it flows good.

Re: lies,love and a neon nightlight (User Rating: 1 )
by deadheadpoet on Wednesday, 6th September 2006 @ 01:32:54 PM AEST
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Hey brother, Good to see you posting. The write is exquisite in it's message. I do like how you write from your heart and your experiences in this rough life, you've been surviving. (Yeah, man. You are a survivor) Would love to see you take care of those spelling boo-boos. But, that's okay man. The content is good, really good. You know I'm a fan.
Peace and hugs,
Laura

Re: lies,love and a neon nightlight (User Rating: 1 )
by unknown_utopia on Saturday, 10th February 2007 @ 10:38:04 PM AEST
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Excellent flow
I like the way it flows.

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