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Array ( [sid] => 12532 [catid] => 1 [aid] => Mick [title] => Upside down [time] => 2003-02-13 05:30:00 [hometext] => [bodytext] => Here I lay
see me as I slip away
dont even care
didnt get anxious did not prepare

Im cast away
not being wanted I have to pay
feel no pain
charges at me like freight train

Fill my life with empty moments
lost inside I have a frown
show me how I need to know this
and turn my life its upside down
carelesly you throw me away
unconcerned you cast me aside
you leave me feeling un-loved
you leave me lacking in my pride

cant believe
how easily you decieve
still no more
I try and wonder what this lifes for
its just a bore

now I know
to get your way you put on a show
you never were the truth
misguiding then you pass me by

Fill my life with empty moments
lost inside I have a frown
show me how I need to know this
and turn my life its upside down
carelesly you throw me away
unconcerned you cast me aside
you leave me feeling un-loved
you leave me lacking in my pride

Stop why cant you look me in the eye
you just try to hide
make me take pitty cause you cry
cause you cry
and you lie

what are we gonna do about this
here and now
everything that you always taken now your gonna give
now your gonna give

Fill my life with empty moments
lost inside I have a frown
show me how I need to know this
and turn my life its upside down
carelesly you throw me away
unconcerned you cast me aside
you leave me feeling un-loved
you leave me lacking in my pride
[comments] => 2 [counter] => 168 [topic] => 34 [informant] => Rawjer [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => SongLyrics )
Upside down

Contributed by Rawjer on Thursday, 13th February 2003 @ 05:30:00 AM in AEST
Topic: SongLyrics



Here I lay
see me as I slip away
dont even care
didnt get anxious did not prepare

Im cast away
not being wanted I have to pay
feel no pain
charges at me like freight train

Fill my life with empty moments
lost inside I have a frown
show me how I need to know this
and turn my life its upside down
carelesly you throw me away
unconcerned you cast me aside
you leave me feeling un-loved
you leave me lacking in my pride

cant believe
how easily you decieve
still no more
I try and wonder what this lifes for
its just a bore

now I know
to get your way you put on a show
you never were the truth
misguiding then you pass me by

Fill my life with empty moments
lost inside I have a frown
show me how I need to know this
and turn my life its upside down
carelesly you throw me away
unconcerned you cast me aside
you leave me feeling un-loved
you leave me lacking in my pride

Stop why cant you look me in the eye
you just try to hide
make me take pitty cause you cry
cause you cry
and you lie

what are we gonna do about this
here and now
everything that you always taken now your gonna give
now your gonna give

Fill my life with empty moments
lost inside I have a frown
show me how I need to know this
and turn my life its upside down
carelesly you throw me away
unconcerned you cast me aside
you leave me feeling un-loved
you leave me lacking in my pride




Copyright © Rawjer ... [ 2003-02-13 05:30:00]
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Re: Upside down (User Rating: 1 )
by venkat on Thursday, 13th February 2003 @ 06:23:40 AM AEST
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Touching lines, quite attractive..A nice read..venkat


Re: Upside down (User Rating: 1 )
by Maybella on Wednesday, 19th February 2003 @ 05:41:19 PM AEST
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i just wanna say that if that song doesn't have music to it you should definitely make some right away! that would make such a powerful and moving song, and i'd love to hear it sung. ~alyssa




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