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Time goes on
Contributed by
Rawjer
on
Thursday, 13th February 2003 @ 04:30:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
LoveRemembered
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maybe not having fought
for the things that are sought
feel the presence that you bring
flowing with the words that you sing
in every breath and every glance
seceret trance to bring your life
carried out another wish behind
what is mine what I find
is another step to make my way up
half full is the cup
with a goofy face to fill an empty space
with a grace that I must face
not using to replace or disgrace the last occupant
just a sense of moving on
as time goes on
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Rawjer
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2003-02-13 04:30:00]
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Re: Time goes on
(User Rating: 1 )
by LOWMAN613 on
Thursday, 13th February 2003 @ 10:36:25 AM AEST
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| So true time does move on! Great write,well said! Christina |
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Re: Time goes on
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by MoonlitAngel on
Friday, 14th February 2003 @ 12:05:42 AM AEST
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I like this! It flows really, really nicely. Great job!
~ MoonlitAngel |
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