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Array ( [sid] => 125290 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Ummmmmm? oh yeah!..nah.... next [time] => 2006-09-04 02:35:26 [hometext] => the things we write whe writters block is present.....lol its in fun, smile [bodytext] => Im gonna cry
I want to let it all out
im gonna try
i hope you know what I'm talking bout
and why!

I try to find the words
and in my mind its so clear
by the time it hits the paper
I go blank everything disappears

Things that use to inspire
just seem so0o0o tired

I want words to change the world
heartbreak has left
"Dont wanna write about that girl !!!!"

watch'n the news
so many thoughts come to mind
I know what to say
but the words i just cant find

I wanna upgrade my membership
but damn i get so ******
Knowing my luck
I'll probally get 365 days like this

I wrote "Syphony of the Night"
mod # ** erased it...
ok, maybe a little detailed
but not at all tasteless

Man, was i heated!!!!!!!
re-read the rules of the site,
aiight, i 4 got.
so its cool you deleted

Flip'n threw pages
it seems clear pages taunt & stick out tongue
i dont know whats worst, that
Or maybe the smerks of poems never done

I just get so flustered
cant think of what to write
i got so much on my mind
just no topic that i like

Got in the car late night
took me a drive
see most times it helps,
to take a long ride

As you can tell i got jerked
in other words it didnt work
this pen losing ink!!
O.k. , now my head hurts

Brain cramp or cramped brain
writters block or block head writter
Not a carrying, thought all day
now im pulling a all nighter

It dont matter all the same
just right now, i aint game
and i need something to blame

So0o0o, I guess imma try to sleep
and hope tomorrow feel refreshed
yeah, rate it, give ya comments
I dont even believe i posted this mess.

BUT wait, look up
I think i posted a poem!
i guess, i will be alright
if i find a topic and keep go'n
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Ummmmmm? oh yeah!..nah.... next

Contributed by evolon on Monday, 4th September 2006 @ 02:35:26 AM in AEST
Topic: poets



Im gonna cry
I want to let it all out
im gonna try
i hope you know what I'm talking bout
and why!

I try to find the words
and in my mind its so clear
by the time it hits the paper
I go blank everything disappears

Things that use to inspire
just seem so0o0o tired

I want words to change the world
heartbreak has left
"Dont wanna write about that girl !!!!"

watch'n the news
so many thoughts come to mind
I know what to say
but the words i just cant find

I wanna upgrade my membership
but damn i get so ******
Knowing my luck
I'll probally get 365 days like this

I wrote "Syphony of the Night"
mod # ** erased it...
ok, maybe a little detailed
but not at all tasteless

Man, was i heated!!!!!!!
re-read the rules of the site,
aiight, i 4 got.
so its cool you deleted

Flip'n threw pages
it seems clear pages taunt & stick out tongue
i dont know whats worst, that
Or maybe the smerks of poems never done

I just get so flustered
cant think of what to write
i got so much on my mind
just no topic that i like

Got in the car late night
took me a drive
see most times it helps,
to take a long ride

As you can tell i got jerked
in other words it didnt work
this pen losing ink!!
O.k. , now my head hurts

Brain cramp or cramped brain
writters block or block head writter
Not a carrying, thought all day
now im pulling a all nighter

It dont matter all the same
just right now, i aint game
and i need something to blame

So0o0o, I guess imma try to sleep
and hope tomorrow feel refreshed
yeah, rate it, give ya comments
I dont even believe i posted this mess.

BUT wait, look up
I think i posted a poem!
i guess, i will be alright
if i find a topic and keep go'n




Copyright © evolon ... [ 2006-09-04 02:35:26]
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Re: Ummmmmm? oh yeah!..nah.... next (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Wednesday, 6th September 2006 @ 11:21:20 AM AEST
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lol. i think we've all felt like this before at least i know i have. this was a fun read and so true.




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