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Array ( [sid] => 125283 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => The End [time] => 2006-09-04 00:12:32 [hometext] => [bodytext] => Silence sweeps across the empty street
and paralyzes my cold body
as I gasp for this world's toxic air.
This emptiness breaks the dead silence
as I let out a deafening scream
for help but no one hears me.

My heart is frozen.
My skin is red.
My bones are shaking.
This is the end.

These scratches are burning
and my blood is screaming to set it free,
now watch the blood pour out of me.
The skin on my wrists is so thin.
When the skin is red,
you'll know that I'm dead.

It all starts, with the arrow going through the heart.
IT RIPS THE INSIDES APART!
It all ends, with the heart unable to mend.
NEVER LOVE AGAIN! [comments] => 3 [counter] => 243 [topic] => 13 [informant] => Gayla [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => DarkPoetry )

The End

Contributed by Gayla on Monday, 4th September 2006 @ 12:12:32 AM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry

Silence sweeps across the empty street
and paralyzes my cold body
as I gasp for this world's toxic air.
This emptiness breaks the dead silence
as I let out a deafening scream
for help but no one hears me.

My heart is frozen.
My skin is red.
My bones are shaking.
This is the end.

These scratches are burning
and my blood is screaming to set it free,
now watch the blood pour out of me.
The skin on my wrists is so thin.
When the skin is red,
you'll know that I'm dead.

It all starts, with the arrow going through the heart.
IT RIPS THE INSIDES APART!
It all ends, with the heart unable to mend.
NEVER LOVE AGAIN!

Copyright © Gayla ... [ 2006-09-04 00:12:32]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: The End (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Monday, 4th September 2006 @ 11:30:40 PM AEST
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Very sad but well written. One can feel the pain.
luv, huggs, prayer,
emy

Re: The End (User Rating: 1 )
by Aaron8124 on Thursday, 22nd January 2009 @ 04:33:10 PM AEST
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I love this poem and I know about the underlying issue.:( seek help if you need it love, it helped me a lot *hugs*

Re: The End (User Rating: 1 )
by fanniesson on Tuesday, 27th January 2009 @ 04:49:44 PM AEST
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Well I have to admit you do get your point across
in this piece.
The last line does put it all together nicely .
great read here

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