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Array ( [sid] => 125259 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Angels Wings [time] => 2006-09-03 10:31:21 [hometext] => not so sure the topic fits, but needs must! [bodytext] => Your hands wrap themselves around my heart,
As your voice tells me I shall no longer be in pain,
That elusive feeling of love overcomes me,
Seeps into my skin, and into each vein,
I know that I shall never be free of you,
For my heart breaks each time you go,
I find myself longing and craving your touch,
To be held so close, and rocked so slow,
In time to the beat only I can hear,
The sweet music of your soul,
Whilst angels wings catch my tears,
And heartbreak takes its toll,
I’ve missed you before you’ve even gone,
Before you leave me in this hell,
Loneliness it seems, is my only friend,
And anger knows me too well. [comments] => 6 [counter] => 224 [topic] => 22 [informant] => Ruby2sdy [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 14 [ratings] => 3 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LostLove )

Angels Wings

Contributed by Ruby2sdy on Sunday, 3rd September 2006 @ 10:31:21 AM in AEST
Topic: LostLove

Your hands wrap themselves around my heart,
As your voice tells me I shall no longer be in pain,
That elusive feeling of love overcomes me,
Seeps into my skin, and into each vein,
I know that I shall never be free of you,
For my heart breaks each time you go,
I find myself longing and craving your touch,
To be held so close, and rocked so slow,
In time to the beat only I can hear,
The sweet music of your soul,
Whilst angels wings catch my tears,
And heartbreak takes its toll,
I’ve missed you before you’ve even gone,
Before you leave me in this hell,
Loneliness it seems, is my only friend,
And anger knows me too well.

Copyright Â© Ruby2sdy ... [ 2006-09-03 10:31:21]
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Re: Angels Wings (User Rating: 1 )
by Rhei76 on Sunday, 3rd September 2006 @ 11:08:50 AM AEST
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interesting

nice write

Re: Angels Wings (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Sunday, 3rd September 2006 @ 11:28:16 AM AEST
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This write seems less a "lost love" and more a recurring torment, ie the line:

"For my heart breaks each time you go,"

The reason for recurrence is left to the readers' imaginations. Nice write, though.

wabl
KenMoore
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Re: Angels Wings (User Rating: 1 )
by lillyjane on Sunday, 3rd September 2006 @ 01:17:50 PM AEST
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really liked this, sad to though. xxx

Re: Angels Wings (User Rating: 1 )
by jerseysue on Sunday, 3rd September 2006 @ 01:42:20 PM AEST
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This is a sad and soulful poem, but saying that, this poem could have also been written as an addiction poem. Very skilfully done Ruby, and if I got the addiction bit wrong, please accept my apologies.
Anyway the words were beautiful, as they always are from your good self. Take care . Sue x

Re: Angels Wings (User Rating: 1 )
by Alison on Sunday, 3rd September 2006 @ 08:17:50 PM AEST
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very sad! i no how u feel, i have been there many times! hang on! awesome write

Re: Angels Wings (User Rating: 1 )
by secretwind on Monday, 4th September 2006 @ 01:22:23 AM AEST
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I feel the emotional torture
of this flow.....
well done.

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