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Array ( [sid] => 125235 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => AS I [time] => 2006-09-02 20:43:34 [hometext] => you know what its like to have the pain from the one you love , so even when you think how bad it hurts you also think of all the love? this is 1 of them confussing deals [bodytext] => AS I,
I try to embrace your fear
I cant let you go
my soul wounded from your never cares
Separated,
Unite me
disregard all emotion
evaporated tears give strength
Love, please return my vision
From
The bigining seemed so warm
days pass, seasons change
Cold........
cold as winters night
so dark i cant see
You
I feel the bitter bite
chills tingle the spine
arctic memories frost bite the mind
Suffering
with out YOU in my space
I miss the warmth my heart reached from seeing your face
now to be gone without a trace
surrounded in self pitty!

Im losing it, you held me together

I thought i left weakness as a memory

Exscuse me as i re- acquaint

Control
my every move, emotion

my every thought im all alone

Fearsful, scared to find happiness in another

I stand a statue of a fool made of stone

I wanna love again bigger than you!

Im trying, sloswly dieing, constant crying

just trying to get threw.

All the anguish, pain joy, happiness

of all the things we will never do...

in short i miss you glad your gone!

i hate loving you [comments] => 2 [counter] => 312 [topic] => 48 [informant] => evolon [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => EmotionalPoetry )
AS I

Contributed by evolon on Saturday, 2nd September 2006 @ 08:43:34 PM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry



AS I,
I try to embrace your fear
I cant let you go
my soul wounded from your never cares
Separated,
Unite me
disregard all emotion
evaporated tears give strength
Love, please return my vision
From
The bigining seemed so warm
days pass, seasons change
Cold........
cold as winters night
so dark i cant see
You
I feel the bitter bite
chills tingle the spine
arctic memories frost bite the mind
Suffering
with out YOU in my space
I miss the warmth my heart reached from seeing your face
now to be gone without a trace
surrounded in self pitty!

Im losing it, you held me together

I thought i left weakness as a memory

Exscuse me as i re- acquaint

Control
my every move, emotion

my every thought im all alone

Fearsful, scared to find happiness in another

I stand a statue of a fool made of stone

I wanna love again bigger than you!

Im trying, sloswly dieing, constant crying

just trying to get threw.

All the anguish, pain joy, happiness

of all the things we will never do...

in short i miss you glad your gone!

i hate loving you




Copyright © evolon ... [ 2006-09-02 20:43:34]
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Re: AS I (User Rating: 1 )
by alecfernadez on Saturday, 2nd September 2006 @ 09:28:10 PM AEST
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this was pretty good, although I feel it could have benifited from a more concise form. I like the last line, and I can tell its a very emotional write for you. Well done.
Alex Trotter-Fernandez


Re: AS I (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Sunday, 3rd September 2006 @ 12:12:38 AM AEST
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I can certainly relate to this awesome writing.
Most folks will too.
Great work.
huggs, prayers,
emy
Awesome!




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