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There’s a time in our hearts…
Where we must, from this world part…

Some sooner than we like…
Some part differently than we like…

We as people feel sorrow for our loss…
But soon that wall of peace we will cross…

Our friend has left us, but he is still here…
In every heart, in every mind, in every tear…

Hold your head up for he lead a great life…
With three young children and a beautiful wife…

Don’t be sad, don’t be angry, don’t be mad…
He accomplished a lot just look at the friends he had…

He left us doing what he loved, this I vow…
For he drives for god now… [comments] => 5 [counter] => 178 [topic] => 52 [informant] => oneir8dude [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 10 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => goodbyepoetry )

Our Friend

Contributed by oneir8dude on Saturday, 2nd September 2006 @ 02:01:54 AM in AEST
Topic: goodbyepoetry

There’s a time in our hearts…
Where we must, from this world part…

Some sooner than we like…
Some part differently than we like…

We as people feel sorrow for our loss…
But soon that wall of peace we will cross…

Our friend has left us, but he is still here…
In every heart, in every mind, in every tear…

Hold your head up for he lead a great life…
With three young children and a beautiful wife…

Don’t be sad, don’t be angry, don’t be mad…
He accomplished a lot just look at the friends he had…

He left us doing what he loved, this I vow…
For he drives for god now…

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Re: Our Friend (User Rating: 1 )
by Skillz on Saturday, 2nd September 2006 @ 02:18:11 AM AEST
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such a very touching poem..how tragic and how kind for you to immortalize him...you are truly a great poet. very sorry for your loss K&H

Re: Our Friend (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Saturday, 2nd September 2006 @ 02:55:46 AM AEST
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Now that's what I'm talkin about.
A masterpeice of strength, understanding, hope, concellation.
it says it all very powerfull
This write will heal not only friends and family but many others thru out eternity,
I'm so sorry for the loss.
luv, huggs, prayer,
emy

Re: Our Friend (User Rating: 1 )
by jerseysue on Saturday, 2nd September 2006 @ 02:19:15 PM AEST
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This is a wonderful poem, in memory of your brother in law. You are sad, but seem to be coping so well in your grief. You are happy he lived, and that is a way forward. These words are beautiful. Sue xx
My sympaties to you and your sister and family. Will leave you with these words from an author.

You can shed tears that he is gone, or you can smile because he has lived.
You can close your eyes and pray that he'll come back, or you can open your eyes and see all he's left. God bless

Re: Our Friend (User Rating: 1 )
by sadaddy on Thursday, 28th September 2006 @ 10:56:02 PM AEST
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Oh what a touching and moving poem you have written in your family’s time of loss. Yes, he is driving for God now in the race of time. My condolences, to you and your entire family for their loss. May peace and joy once again fill your hearts.

sadaddy

Re: Our Friend (User Rating: 1 )
by lyric5 on Tuesday, 21st September 2010 @ 11:53:18 AM AEST
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i can feel the emotion you are speaking of and though this poem is filled with your feelings. good work.

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