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Array ( [sid] => 1252 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Simple Mind [time] => 2002-07-28 15:36:12 [hometext] => If only actual suicide were so simple...
============================ [bodytext] => Poison drifting through my veins
Intentions bind me in chains
Succumb to the weakness of my mind
Better hit rewind because…

A simple mind can change a life
A simple hand with a simple knife
Simplicity will kill us all
Simplicity will make us fall

I digest what’s left of you
Soon my worries will be through
Always hating what I am
Someone bind my hands because…

A simple mind can change a life
A simple hand with a simple knife
Simplicity will kill us all
Simplicity will make us fall

Step into a new point of view
And justify what you feel with a lack of control
See beneath the initial concrete
And confirm what you sense with a lack of strength

Cross the line and drown
Drown in the simplicity
Cross the threshold now
Cross over to the other side

A simple mind can change a life
A simple hand with a simple knife
Simplicity will kill us all
Simplicity will make us fall
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Simple Mind

Contributed by jaysoncarter on Sunday, 28th July 2002 @ 03:36:12 PM in AEST
Topic: SadPoetry

Poison drifting through my veins
Intentions bind me in chains
Succumb to the weakness of my mind
Better hit rewind because…

A simple mind can change a life
A simple hand with a simple knife
Simplicity will kill us all
Simplicity will make us fall

I digest what’s left of you
Soon my worries will be through
Always hating what I am
Someone bind my hands because…

A simple mind can change a life
A simple hand with a simple knife
Simplicity will kill us all
Simplicity will make us fall

Step into a new point of view
And justify what you feel with a lack of control
See beneath the initial concrete
And confirm what you sense with a lack of strength

Cross the line and drown
Drown in the simplicity
Cross the threshold now
Cross over to the other side

A simple mind can change a life
A simple hand with a simple knife
Simplicity will kill us all
Simplicity will make us fall

Copyright Â© jaysoncarter ... [ 2002-07-28 15:36:12]
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Re: Simple Mind (User Rating: 1 )
by Jackee_line on Thursday, 21st November 2002 @ 02:11:36 AM AEST
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nice write

Re: Simple Mind (User Rating: 1 )
by weepingXxwillows on Tuesday, 28th October 2008 @ 07:47:47 PM AEST
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this is a very good poem. with such a message to it. I've been there before and thought about something similar like that, and stoped myself....this poem would have to be one of the best I have read so far.

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