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Array ( [sid] => 125177 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Michelle [time] => 2006-09-01 00:34:49 [hometext] => [bodytext] =>

As I sit reflecting on what we had…
I’m not angry anymore just very sad…

The times we had during those days…
When the times were high in many ways…

I had dreams of you and me. We were together…
And now we’re not and I’m in stormy weather…

You broke my heart the day you were gone…
This pile of dead weight is what you spawned…

I once stood tall and held my head up…
You turned me into a baby who can’t get up…

I'm looking in the mirror and don’t like what I see…
But a crying big baby looking back at me…

My friends see me as changed…
My entire life has been rearranged…

I’m not the man I used to be…
My soul is in bitter agony…

I wish I could get you out of my mind…
What you did is so unkind…

I gave you my life and you took my soul…
Now to crawl inside, I’m digging a hole…

I never will again face the torment…
My Love is gone and my mind is spent…

I want you… you want him…
My life is hanging from life and limb…

You broke my heart the day you were gone…
This pile of dead weight is what you spawned…
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Michelle

Contributed by oneir8dude on Friday, 1st September 2006 @ 12:34:49 AM in AEST
Topic: LostLove





As I sit reflecting on what we had…
I’m not angry anymore just very sad…

The times we had during those days…
When the times were high in many ways…

I had dreams of you and me. We were together…
And now we’re not and I’m in stormy weather…

You broke my heart the day you were gone…
This pile of dead weight is what you spawned…

I once stood tall and held my head up…
You turned me into a baby who can’t get up…

I'm looking in the mirror and don’t like what I see…
But a crying big baby looking back at me…

My friends see me as changed…
My entire life has been rearranged…

I’m not the man I used to be…
My soul is in bitter agony…

I wish I could get you out of my mind…
What you did is so unkind…

I gave you my life and you took my soul…
Now to crawl inside, I’m digging a hole…

I never will again face the torment…
My Love is gone and my mind is spent…

I want you… you want him…
My life is hanging from life and limb…

You broke my heart the day you were gone…
This pile of dead weight is what you spawned…




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Re: Michelle (User Rating: 1 )
by Sasha on Friday, 1st September 2006 @ 12:56:42 AM AEST
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So well expressed...hope you get over the pain soon, when you hurt for someone so much, it points to your capacity to love too, doesnt it?


Re: Michelle (User Rating: 1 )
by sadaddy on Friday, 1st September 2006 @ 01:00:13 AM AEST
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Wow, dude. This is a heart wrenching read. I feel for you guy. Wish you the best. Men are not the only heart breakers. Take care dude.

sadaddy


Re: Michelle (User Rating: 1 )
by Skillz on Friday, 1st September 2006 @ 01:17:22 AM AEST
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Such a heart breaking read..so different from your previous work..this left me feeling so sad for you and angry at the girl..hoping things look up for you. K&H


Re: Michelle (User Rating: 1 )
by shelby on Tuesday, 12th September 2006 @ 10:51:01 PM AEST
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Bad Michelle bad bad Michelle.
I can say that since it isnt me who Im referring too.

This is heartbreaking I really feel ya here!!
Nicely written once again.
Michelle




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