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iLoveYou
Contributed by
xDiSaStErPiEcEx
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Thursday, 31st August 2006 @ 03:42:33 PM in AEST
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hello beautiful,
how are you today?
i'm not here to scream,
there's just something i have to say.
after all we went through,
the memories we've had,
i'll never forget the way,
you made me so glad.
so i just wanted you to know,
how i really feel.
just stopping by to tell you,
those memories are real.
they'll always be there,
even if you regret it.
nothing you can do,
will ever make me forget it.
so one last thing,
before i go.
i love you so much,
i just thought you should know.
The End.
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xDiSaStErPiEcEx
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2006-08-31 15:42:33] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: iLoveYou
(User Rating: 1 ) by jerseysue on
Thursday, 31st August 2006 @ 05:27:26 PM AEST (User
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That is really sweet. I also write poetry the same way, off the cuff. You did really well, its really a heartfelt poem. Loved it. Thanks for sharing. Sue x |
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Re: iLoveYou
(User Rating: 1 ) by TwistedCage on
Thursday, 31st August 2006 @ 11:49:29 PM AEST (User
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Not bad coming of the cuff! (Not bad at all)
Much Love, |
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Re: iLoveYou
(User Rating: 1 ) by Oneir8dude on
Friday, 1st September 2006 @ 12:28:58 AM AEST (User
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Disaster,
In my opinion off the cuff is the only way to write words of love... It comes from the heart if you don't have to think about it... That is the only way I write.. Nice job.
Thank You very much for sharing |
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